All For You!

LV 4

Primate

Writing Quality: High grade. No noticeable errors that could affect the flows of the story. The author is writing from the omniscient third person point of view and is also using present tense format which puts the readers in the thick of the action. Greatly done. Updating stability: The author is really keeping up with her schedules. Writing is a tasking work. I understand perfectly. So, I commend the author on this. Story development: Right from the synopsis, the author already mapped out the storyline. The story is based on Zola who was transported into another world. So far, the story is excellent. The story is not deviating from the plotline which I commend the author for. Character design: They are well thought out by the author. Each character has a unique attitude. The MC is quite a beautiful character. She's lovable. Great work. World background: This is a fantasy romance world. The author really knows how to blend the fantasy world setting. Great work. Over all, great work.

The story is very well described and keeps you going until the very satisfying climax. An interesting an enticing story can't wait for more! [img=update]

LV 1

Lancee

The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fsacinating escape from reality into another world. A great read

Very beautiful and smooth. Lots of heartbreaking and romance witch is what I hoped for. Needs a balance of action tho and some of the ending sentences feel a little short none the less a good book. -

One of the best pieces of fiction I’ve ever laid my eyes upon, amazing detail and writing the characters are very very enjoyable and it is indefinitely a must read for all isekai enjoyers and more

LV 10

Elle_Lynn

I love the mc and this kind of fantasy historical romance is my favorite. I can’t wait to see how she will learn more about that world and love how she is deciding to read to books to help her expand her knowledge!😍🙏

LV 14

xAlexiax

Great start to an interesting story! 📚 The story flows and descriptions are excellent. MC is likeable and the world background is creative and imaginative. 😊 Keep up the great work author, looking forward to more updates!

LV 4

Chaitzzz

This story is different from the stories that I had previously read, I have read going to the past stories but this one is someway different. There are very minor errors that can be corrected all in all a good story. Keep going!

LV 2

AxlSLL

The characters have that young, energetic feel to them and that's pretty good. The setting, although somewhat generical has the magical vibe it strives for. The pace is good. However, it might be confusing or even tedious to read in some parts due to unnecessary character descriptions at first, readers aren't going to care much about how a character looks. It's their dialogue, actions, feelings, and thoughts that make them intriguing and hooking. Avoid over describing them unless such descriptions serve a plot purpose. The dialogues might also become confusing to read. You need to separate them one from another. More context about who is speaking is also needed. One could easily lose track of what's going on. You need to polish them more. You also need to fix some grammatical and spelling mistakes in the story. They don't make it unreadable, but contribute more to the unpolished work that it currently is. Otherwise it is good. The plot flows smoothly, the characters never bore and the setting has a heartwarming and lighthearted vibe. (Although this can be a bad thing for your first chapter.) Keep working on it. Don't drop it out.