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Ancient Saiyan in ATG(UP FOR ADOPTION)
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this is my first fanfic be warned and please help me with spelling or grammar errors i got kinda ghetto writing style(by the way i spelled ghetto wrong and had to use auto correct)
(it's short cuz i just started this fanfic.)
read the start of the journey of newly "spawned" Ancient saiyan in a world where the strong beat down the weak and near immortals with thousands of years of battle experience, and "prodigys" walk the lands,for most this sounds unpleasant to say the least, but to this battle hungry saiyan however this is paradise, showing his monstrous potential and prodigious talent in progression along with inheriting techniques and his unyielding determination that defies even the Gods themselves!!.
and he only wants one thing to see his limits and tear beyond them
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Good job Ed Boy, the overall is story is fantastic, I would read this anywhere, on the plain, in an attic, or when I’m hiding from god, thank you for this experience
This fix has quite a lot of potential, you just need to fix grammar, spacing, capitalization, run on sentences, unnecessarily big paragraphs, and an editor. If you are interested I could be a sort of beta reader / editor, just message me if interested.