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puedo decir sin temor a equivocarme que es una de las historias mejor escrita con androide 21 que ademas nos presenta una congruencia en todos los aspectos asi como tambien nos deja queriendo ver mucho mas
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I enjoyed what was written so far that was actually apart of the story so hopefully you continue to Write this but if not its your decision in the end
I like the second option better than the first but hey do want you want to do Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Its satisfying enjoyable laughable and thankfully know where near as over sexualized as i feared it would be please keep posting and keep up the good work
Really love this one, patiently waiting for more. ..........................................................................................
kool story really hope you update soon hjnhjnbghjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
A very interesting storyline and quite an awesome character design.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 I look forward to the new chapters😍
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Me encanta no puedo esperar para mas caps. Me gusta mucho el personaje y su trasfondo aunque me confunde un poco la parte de all for one pero creo que esta buena
There is not much chapters right now so I can't review on anything specific but I hope you continue with your story and don't drop. This story is very good and I got to the latest chapters without realizing it. I hope you keep up the good work!
buena historia de yuri , ojala agregues a : -momo yaoyorozu. -nejire hado. -himiko toga. -Teenaged Midnight. -Mt. Lady [YU TAKEYAMA] . -mirkyo(rabbit). ----------------------------------------------////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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not much to said here. but the concept of Echidna incarnate itself its already inresting enough to see. its rare to see something like echidna mentioned in novel from this site. i just hope the words count is enough for donating stone to show my support!!!! Good Luck!!!!!
interesing. ******************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Shameless author being shameless rather shamelessly! in all honesty, this story is a bit of a test fic for an original story I'm working on with a similar system involved. basically doing this to work out the kinks in the system while not focusing on making an original world on top of it. don't expect anything too groundbreaking as far as the plot goes but ill try not to make this just a si with no changes whatsoever. if it does well maybe i'll continue the story and have her world hop, otherwise don't expect this story to go on for long.
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This is pretty good. If it gets finished then I will recommend it to literally everyone. I also didn’t notice that many grammar mistakes. So it’s not hard to read like a lot of them. All in all I would say that if it gets finished it will be really good
puedo decir sin temor a equivocarme que es una de las historias mejor escrita con androide 21 que ademas nos presenta una congruencia en todos los aspectos asi como tambien nos deja queriendo ver mucho mas
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I enjoyed what was written so far that was actually apart of the story so hopefully you continue to Write this but if not its your decision in the end
I like the second option better than the first but hey do want you want to do Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Its satisfying enjoyable laughable and thankfully know where near as over sexualized as i feared it would be please keep posting and keep up the good work
Really love this one, patiently waiting for more. ..........................................................................................
kool story really hope you update soon hjnhjnbghjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
A very interesting storyline and quite an awesome character design.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 I look forward to the new chapters😍
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Me encanta no puedo esperar para mas caps. Me gusta mucho el personaje y su trasfondo aunque me confunde un poco la parte de all for one pero creo que esta buena
There is not much chapters right now so I can't review on anything specific but I hope you continue with your story and don't drop. This story is very good and I got to the latest chapters without realizing it. I hope you keep up the good work!
buena historia de yuri , ojala agregues a : -momo yaoyorozu. -nejire hado. -himiko toga. -Teenaged Midnight. -Mt. Lady [YU TAKEYAMA] . -mirkyo(rabbit). ----------------------------------------------////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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More chapter please autor. ****************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
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not much to said here. but the concept of Echidna incarnate itself its already inresting enough to see. its rare to see something like echidna mentioned in novel from this site. i just hope the words count is enough for donating stone to show my support!!!! Good Luck!!!!!
interesing. ******************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Shameless author being shameless rather shamelessly! in all honesty, this story is a bit of a test fic for an original story I'm working on with a similar system involved. basically doing this to work out the kinks in the system while not focusing on making an original world on top of it. don't expect anything too groundbreaking as far as the plot goes but ill try not to make this just a si with no changes whatsoever. if it does well maybe i'll continue the story and have her world hop, otherwise don't expect this story to go on for long.
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This is pretty good. If it gets finished then I will recommend it to literally everyone. I also didn’t notice that many grammar mistakes. So it’s not hard to read like a lot of them. All in all I would say that if it gets finished it will be really good