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So here goes. The pros. First, I like the unique character of the MC, he isn’t a bullied orphan or a powerless weakling, he retaliates. (Although I need to read more to know if he’s the bully). Second, as far as I read, the readers will feel more self substitution when they see the MC reading manga and acting otakuish, for those who are an otaku of course. Third, I feel it has potential if you polish it. Okay, for the cons. Many grammar mistakes. Some spelling mistakes. Many punctuation mistakes. You need to work on that, because even if the work is good, the writing will bring it down. So I advise you to use Grammarly for this, it will help. Also you need to re read your chapter a lot before posting it, don’t feel limited by what you have, if you feel the paragraph isn’t good then just rewrite it. Also, I hope the MC isn’t a bully haha, because he sounded like one. I can’t comment on anything else since I didn’t read it. But I think your novel can be polished with its creativity and become something that people actually love. Oh, don’t use too many anime references. I know your novel is about animes, so just use the outline of an anime instead of the details that not everyone knows.
Boi (or gal), when most people want to enter an anime, it's usually to either have *** with the female heroines or to be badass as hell.... 140characters 140characters 140characters 140characters 140characters 140characters
I saw coppellion and another anime I like but forgot the title but there's the word Ao in the title XD hahahahaha sooo when's the next update?
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tell me the update schedule! I need to know! I love Terror Infinity! and now there's an anime version?! HECK yeah. it suck that the fanfiction Terror Infinity side B is on a indefinite hiatus, I've been suffering like a drug addict because of it and now I found another stuff to addict myself on.