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This is an amazing story. The main character suffers, suffers, but fights the most terrible enemy - by himself and seems to be winning ?! Becomes a better person than he was! Because he was able to overcome temptation and temptation! The text block is great. Those chapters that I read. They are written naturally. The plot is simple and complex at the same time. The author is able to twist the intrigue in each new chapter. The story is fascinating, although it is on the brink. But the author honestly warns his reader about this. This novel is not easy. therefore, the car indicates that it can only be read with parents together. The author owns the word, skillfully turning the novel into fascinating reading.
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OMG so here I go first this is a freakin unique story for me, at first I thought this would be a forbidden romance from the 1 chap but I guess it's not, and Omg it was kind funny from the chapter two. This sends ripples of emotions in my heart no kidding. Omg, YiYi my little ball of sunshine I am so in love with him and I am curious to know what will happen next in the story. And only chapters and this much progress Not bad! And it was easy for me to read too since the sentenses are kept simple yet very discriptive.
Doesn't this touch the borderline of forbidden love? It's a rather interesting take on the reincarnation of lovers. Although their circumstances are unfavourable and Xin Wenruo needs to provide necessities for Yiyi, as a reader, I'd like to feel more about Xin Wenruo's dilemma that her previous lover was reincarnated as her child. I'd like to see her mulling over and over her situation. For the reason that, isn't it because of her intense love for her lover that she's utterly devastated? It's like that feeling was gone in an instant. However, I do like your concept, very much so. I'd like to see Xin Wenruo and Yiyi's character developments and the evolution of their relationship as a whole. In terms of technical writing, there are minor mistakes in the grammar. As I've said, they're minor and could be easily proofread. It does not affect your plot whatsoever, but editing will make it a tad easier for other readers. I'm not saying this out of spite! They're merely constructive. :) You have a really great story here, and I hope that my review will encourage you to write more! I am looking forward to very cute Yiyi's growth!
I am amazed by the support you have shown for my novel i will be the same for you keep it up i look forward to your work as well. You have a good idea keep it up.
This is my first time reading this kind of story as i read more i find it very enjoyable to read a very interesting twist good writing quality i will enjoy this book keep up the good work😀
i love this novel! The author writes so well and makes me wanting for more. The story flows so smoothly and i especially love the finesse on how the author plays with the words that creates a fantastical world that is filled with love and magic. Thank you for writing this novel, dear Author. More chapters please! ^_^
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Amazing story and a unique plot. Heroine have a still heart which start thinking after she become a mother of a child! The description is also on another level. Acongratz
This is an amazing story. The main character suffers, suffers, but fights the most terrible enemy - by himself and seems to be winning ?! Becomes a better person than he was! Because he was able to overcome temptation and temptation! The text block is great. Those chapters that I read. They are written naturally. The plot is simple and complex at the same time. The author is able to twist the intrigue in each new chapter. The story is fascinating, although it is on the brink. But the author honestly warns his reader about this. This novel is not easy. therefore, the car indicates that it can only be read with parents together. The author owns the word, skillfully turning the novel into fascinating reading.
Reveal Spoiler OMG so here I go first this is a freakin unique story for me, at first I thought this would be a forbidden romance from the 1 chap but I guess it's not, and Omg it was kind funny from the chapter two. This sends ripples of emotions in my heart no kidding. Omg, YiYi my little ball of sunshine I am so in love with him and I am curious to know what will happen next in the story. And only chapters and this much progress Not bad! And it was easy for me to read too since the sentenses are kept simple yet very discriptive.
Doesn't this touch the borderline of forbidden love? It's a rather interesting take on the reincarnation of lovers. Although their circumstances are unfavourable and Xin Wenruo needs to provide necessities for Yiyi, as a reader, I'd like to feel more about Xin Wenruo's dilemma that her previous lover was reincarnated as her child. I'd like to see her mulling over and over her situation. For the reason that, isn't it because of her intense love for her lover that she's utterly devastated? It's like that feeling was gone in an instant. However, I do like your concept, very much so. I'd like to see Xin Wenruo and Yiyi's character developments and the evolution of their relationship as a whole. In terms of technical writing, there are minor mistakes in the grammar. As I've said, they're minor and could be easily proofread. It does not affect your plot whatsoever, but editing will make it a tad easier for other readers. I'm not saying this out of spite! They're merely constructive. :) You have a really great story here, and I hope that my review will encourage you to write more! I am looking forward to very cute Yiyi's growth!
I am amazed by the support you have shown for my novel i will be the same for you keep it up i look forward to your work as well. You have a good idea keep it up.
This is my first time reading this kind of story as i read more i find it very enjoyable to read a very interesting twist good writing quality i will enjoy this book keep up the good work😀
i love this novel! The author writes so well and makes me wanting for more. The story flows so smoothly and i especially love the finesse on how the author plays with the words that creates a fantastical world that is filled with love and magic. Thank you for writing this novel, dear Author. More chapters please! ^_^
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Amazing story and a unique plot. Heroine have a still heart which start thinking after she become a mother of a child! The description is also on another level. Acongratz