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As Aizen in Naruto and Joined a Chat Group
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What if Aizen Sōsuke descended into the world of Naruto?
An Ran finds himself in the Ninja World — playing the role of the mastermind Aizen. To fully unlock his character’s potential, he joins the Akatsuki under the name Aizen Sōsuke. Just as he begins his infiltration, a mysterious invitation pops up:
You’ve been invited to the Dimensional Chat Group.
And that’s when chaos begins.
Dimensional Chat Log:
The Actor: Hey guys, I’m Aizen. Just joined. Newbie here.
Konan : Welcome! Funny timing — Obito brought in a new recruit too.
Gintoki : Wait, a new recruit? Isn’t Itachi supposed to join in like... two years?
Konan : Not Itachi. He says he’s Aizen Sosuke. Claims his strongest illusion is Kyōka Suigetsu. Then he pulls out a sword like he’s some kind of samurai. Totally bizarre, right?
Gintoki : ???
Sawamura Spencer Eriri : ???
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MC revealing that he has another system to the members of the group chat is one of the worst decisions the author has ever made and after reading the fanfic to that point I lost all the interest I had This has to be the biggest fumble done by the author
Way too much useless talk in chat, they are so many timeskip in the story and miss the most important but we get the useless chat log ? That story became really really boring. It had potential, but next time choose carrefully the characters you want to introduce in your story and think about what they bring to the story. -The writing is ok(5/5) -Story Developement is existant only at the beginning (2/5l -Character design is mid (3/5) -The uptdate is fast but has no substance (3/5) -There is not really a world background at this point(1/5) That is my review, I tried to not be too harsh, I really took my time to give that story a chance but it just has no point to exist anymore. Please author, read this and learn what you can. You have a lot of potential.
The author is well done!!! Keep up the good work!!! Very interesting. The main thing is not to abandon this fanfiction!! And it would be cool to reveal more features of the system, add more characters.
I don't write reviews often, but this is a great fanfic! No glaring grammar issues, interesting plot, and fun story overall!
Totalmente decepcionado quedé, este fanfic empezó muy bien pero todo lo bueno tiene que terminar, desde que se completó o puede que antes(no estoy seguro) lo del mundo de Naruto con el MC actuando como Aizen este fanfic se convirtió en más bien un fanfic de la vida cotidiana Yuri a más no poder....lo molesto es que este traductor no se digno a poner la maldita etiqueta de Yuri lo cual me abría hecho no leer ni un solo capítulo perdí mí tiempo
Скучно, ужасно скучно. Одни диалоги и никаких событий. Гг неинтересен, просто ещё один фоновый персонаж с имба способностями. Персонажи картонные, ведут себя не логично, словно они собой и не являются.
basically this is a good story but with very very bad translation the character names can change at any time
Btf it's a chines fan fic [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
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it's an ok story. The translation isn't that good but it's not the worst I've read. The only really good point I can think of is that the author did a phenomenal job replicating the original Aizen's personality while still making the MC his own person. He's got Aizen's intelligence and god tier manipulation abilities but he also does still care about his friends. It's a fine line and the author walked it like a pro. Too much Aizen makes for a story in this genre, unless you're a really good author, like Gu Zhen Ren good, but too little Aizen defeats the purpose of this story altogether. The think I absolutely hate about this story though is how much all the group chat members bully the Gintama characters, Gin and Katsura when he later joins. At the beginning it was fine because it was just banter between friends and everyone was a target, even the MC is a few cases, but as the story progresses, and especially after Katsura joined, it started becoming too much. The worse example I can think of now is when the group chat allowed Gin to get Katsura imprisoned by this female only organisation, that I forget the name of, and have a baguette shoved up his butt while he was unconscious. Then they let Katsura eat it, while they laughed at him, who was unaware of what he was eating. And that's just one example of how much they bully Katsura. Admittedly, Him was never bullied physically like this but he's getting bullied mentally by everyone in the group chat for sure. I can't articulate one specific situation of bullying because it's all small things that accumulate, but if you do read the story you'll understand what I mean. This ended up being quite a long post and I didn't put down everything I think of, I actually had to rewrite it multiple times to condense it from around 5k words to around 2k words, but I think I wrote enough to get my opinion on this story across. TLDR it's an average story for a story of this genre but there are some annoying things that I absolutely hate about it and only one thing I like about it
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Man... The story was kinda mess at first and there's so many error in translation and the poison in this fic are bad. thanks for the fic tho
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God, what a boring book! The chapters are mostly just chat room conversations. The main character is Gary Stu, and after the Naruto arc ended, everything got kind of dull for me. The only thing that saves it are the scenes with Gintoki and Kotonoha; everything else is a drag. Doesn't the author know how to write chapters without them being pages and pages of chat room dialogue? Even if it's funny, there's just too much of it. The story itself is only 8/10, mostly chat, and the other 2% is plot-related stuff, which is even more annoying when you add the romantic development and the whole thing about turning the main character into a 23-year-old in a 14-year-old's body for some unnecessary reason. It's well-written, but the problems just outweigh everything else. Bad history Good translación Drop drop drop drop drop drop drop drop drop drop
I’ve read a lot of novels, but few manage to paint such clear pictures in my mind. Your storytelling is rich and immersive, and the way you capture emotion and setting makes it feel like a living world. I kept thinking how amazing it would look as a graphic novel or webtoon, the tone, pacing, and character moments all fit that format so naturally. This story really has the kind of depth and energy that could shine visually too.
HEAVY NATIONALISM.... With CHINCHONG Propaganda. For short, by this FF's standard EVERYTHING in the world are less worthy than everything that comes from CHINCHONG Country. Don't get triggered when you're reading this shit
Out side of the quality drops after chapter 70 and again after chapter 146, it’s a solid read. Definitely recommend. 4/5 8/10 82/100
The story is really confusing. I don't know if some of the sentences or even entire chapters are lost in the translation or what. In one scene, Konan is talking to him, in the next scene, she's having a chat with the chat members. And no, time does not stop while someone is conversing in the chat. In one scene, he has already defected from Konoha and is attacked by Orochimaru. In the next scene, he's showing Konon his laboratory in the Pure World (like, why even), and then in the scene after that, he's suddenly back in Konoha, talking with the Hokage and the elders as if he never defected in the first place. Perhaps it's a clone of his, but it's never really explained, so the reader is just left confused about what is going on. It's all sorts of confusing. Which is disappointing, as I thought that the story had some potential. But after a point, the story just becomes unreadable. The fact that most of the chat group members are people that I've not even heard about doesn't help either.