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(Meta Essence Fan Fic.)
Having nothing but a mediocre life on earth his eventual stumbling upon a survey while surfing the internet. Thrown into a world filled with dragons and mythical beings with powers known as [Skills] that are able to defy all known logic and which would be able to kill him easily but he has be given a gift. The intelligence of a God. We watch this young man climb his way up to become a sovereign with nothing but the intelligence of a deity.
Current World: Tensura(Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime)
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So much potential already. author please dont drop, really unique writing style too, this has the potential to be a top then fanfic author dont drop please.
The transmigration aspect is poorly explained and lacks any intrigue, the unrealistic and unexplained discovery of a bottle that grants the protagonist super intelligence. [idea similar the first 17 chapters of the novel Possessing Nothing but badly executed] The protagonist's supposed intelligence and their actual behavior, instead of speaking and acting intelligently, the protagonist starts screaming, behaves in a weird and edgy manner, and comes across as downright insane and immature. The protagonist finds themselves in a situation where they have to survive based on sheer luck, rather than their supposedly intelligent use of skills. The skills received, such as Regeneration, a mysterious energy and drink shouldn't be included and have no meaning to the plot, and the op thought acceleration is not original or balanced, and he should also get a skill similar to [Great Sage] that is original. The generic term "Body" should have been replaced with something more fitting, such as "physique." Most of these skills should have been upgraded and combined into one or two more cohesive abilities like [Superior Physique]: gives [Pain Nullification], [Bleeding Reduction], [Minor Regeneration], [Hardened Body]... [Clear Mind] gives [Fear Resistance], [Willpower]... [Enchanced Mind] gives [Analysis], [Model Contraction], [Object and World Visualization]... The progression and him acquiring skills should be slower, instead of him getting all at once.