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The story speaks of a man who did a very heroic act before his death, and the next moment he opened his eyes he found himself in the Marvel universe and with him the alien watch known as the Omnitrix, what would he do in his new life? And what adventures are waiting for him?
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Write a reviewI could make this 5 star but it has too many grammatical errors. Also this is a re-write as the author says, but looks like its not. Author if you are re-writing, atleast improve your grammar. So far this fanfic is still good.
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ok... i hope this is useful... i have not written any reviews like . this one before... anyway: one, good so far but you could have just kept going with the original, unless you had writers block thats fine i do to with mine. two: when ever you want some ideas for aliens or mythological creatures just ask me i have made up & drawn 100s
Reveal SpoilerI hope to see an end to this novel as I liked the previous version. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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I like the story so far and the idea of the omnitrex in marvel universe and i hope the author continue to release new chapters. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I don't really like review, but i think i just write some bullsh*t here(Author is forcing me to write some review on his fanfic, please don't tell author-san my reader friend๐๐๐) Let start review for stability of uploaded chapter. Honestly i think this fanfic have good daily upload so i give him good score here, don't force me write more about upload because i just meet writer Block here hooman. ๐๐ Next about story'. I think this fanfic is unique. Just look around in fanfic section here, you can see too much about dxd, atg, Naruto, and ect. It not me hate anime or weeb but too much of them is not very logical to me, some of them having too "op" MC without hard training or just want cacth them all with pokeball, i think you know what i mean hooman. It not work if author write like that but some Entity like me maybe don't like this kind of story' so please think bit before read them and don't attack them just becuase you don't like they story' hooman. Back to my review, this fanfic have good kind story' it bit ligth for now. Story' is about lil' hooman who die in last world and transfer to new body in new world. I know some of you want say this setting is bit lame but what way you want to another world, if you have new way please write below, hehehe. ๐ Next char setting. MC is good to me. He have personality, have background Story, have some goal, but He don't have woman for now. Another Chara i think for later hehehe(i bit lazy to write them hehe) And for world setting i think it to early for me on write it on this review. This fanfic have some detail world build thing for me now. So i have my review and here because my phone to laggy to write more. Sorry if this review bit annoying to you because i not write it for you hooman hahaha, oops i mean sorry if i make mistake or hurt your feeling hooman. Thank for read till here and have good time hooman๐๐
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Author Purplezhz
Hey, writer here, this is a rewrite of my previous novel of the same name, I plan to make some modification to this version and to the hero in particular.