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Take this piece of rock.i want more.The story is really novel and there isn't a lot of good Ben 10 here.
really liked the story, it's very satisfying with the characters, I just didn't like the harem very much. Everything else is fine and before I leave, I have a question. Is the eon going to appear in ben 10: justice incarnate.
I really hope you come back to the story please when you can it is really good cuz I really like all the chapters you made for the story of Ben 10 in Marvel Universe I'm glad you made it cuz awesome Firestone tires
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Eyy look at this when i leave this story its just 10 chap and now its umm (sorry i dont see it im writing the review right now) 15+ chap? Haha yeah keep it up author the story is seems very promising
Amazing story by Author-san. For those in the review section, the story is basically Ben 10 in the DC universe. As a fan of both ben 10 and DC universe, the author has outdone himself in character development. All the characters are not 2D like some fan-fics out there, and the story development is amazing. I personally like Ben 10 the author has created and even gets the aliens' transformation side-effect right(the descriptions are a plus, and yes, I read those). Anyhow, I would 10/10 recommend this fan-fic for anyone who was able to find it.
Great novel. That's all imma say. Fxtudofhkddjlviyxgjcjtdkufdtucyjd big data analytics.The first place.The first thing tomorrow and novels.I'm
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
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So far he's only releasing chapters published on fanfiction.net, I don't know if he's really the author or he's just taking advantage of someone else's work.
this is fun to read and I hope you keep weighting because this and your other story have me wanting more. and I'm glad you took the time to get Ben situation in order.
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I love this novel, especially the interactions between the characters, but please do not turn it into a harem, as this will be contrary to Ben principles and the characters in the novel.
I give this rating because. 1- is ben 10. 2-I can delete the rating if I don't like it at the end. 3- I have many hopes for this..........................................................................
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The story is really good and I especially liked the prologue with a suitable explaination of how he got to the dc world and also gives a reason for why he doesn't need to find a way back to his home world... However I hope he doesn't get some sort of bs harem because with the way things are it seems like it. I would really hope that he doesn't get one cause it really wouldn't suit his personality and all that.
amazing story, down to earth mc , and it's probably gonna be a harem 😌. keep up the good work author😁 -------------------------------------
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i think this novel has potential compared to some ben10 fic out there,the story is quite logical with the alien theme being more pronounced yet not overwhelming im looking forward to more releases soon
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The story is good ok, idk if author is trying to make a harem or what (because he only has female friends) but everything else is cool i just cant wait till he can copy Superman’s dna or Detective Martians... to be honest im surprised that the omnitrix can’t analyze Meta-humans... supposedly when the particular accelerator exploded, it changed their dna, so they technically are another race, and omnitrix favorite thing is gather information on genes and races, so mutations like poison ivy could be analyzed too but it would be too op if he could just copy everyone’s powers (except external one like the green lanterns or are connected to a dimension like the speed force)
4 star because of ben10. I hope this is op mc because omitrix is broken as fk if you watched the ben10.with omitrix to copy DNA. its should be able to copy krypotonite gene and improve its. its how it work in ben10..well good luck, and hope more chapter coming soonnnnnn
Take this piece of rock.i want more.The story is really novel and there isn't a lot of good Ben 10 here.
really liked the story, it's very satisfying with the characters, I just didn't like the harem very much. Everything else is fine and before I leave, I have a question. Is the eon going to appear in ben 10: justice incarnate.
I really hope you come back to the story please when you can it is really good cuz I really like all the chapters you made for the story of Ben 10 in Marvel Universe I'm glad you made it cuz awesome Firestone tires
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Eyy look at this when i leave this story its just 10 chap and now its umm (sorry i dont see it im writing the review right now) 15+ chap? Haha yeah keep it up author the story is seems very promising
Amazing story by Author-san. For those in the review section, the story is basically Ben 10 in the DC universe. As a fan of both ben 10 and DC universe, the author has outdone himself in character development. All the characters are not 2D like some fan-fics out there, and the story development is amazing. I personally like Ben 10 the author has created and even gets the aliens' transformation side-effect right(the descriptions are a plus, and yes, I read those). Anyhow, I would 10/10 recommend this fan-fic for anyone who was able to find it.
Great novel. That's all imma say. Fxtudofhkddjlviyxgjcjtdkufdtucyjd big data analytics.The first place.The first thing tomorrow and novels.I'm
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
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this is fun to read and I hope you keep weighting because this and your other story have me wanting more. and I'm glad you took the time to get Ben situation in order.
Me gusto+++++++++++++±++++++++++±++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++=++++++++++++
I love this novel, especially the interactions between the characters, but please do not turn it into a harem, as this will be contrary to Ben principles and the characters in the novel.
I give this rating because. 1- is ben 10. 2-I can delete the rating if I don't like it at the end. 3- I have many hopes for this..........................................................................
I am the exp of my sword... Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood... I have created over a thousand useless review... Unknown to death, nor known to life... Have withstood pain to create many reviews... Yet, those hands will never hold anything... So, as i pray...Unlimited Exp Works!
thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
The story is really good and I especially liked the prologue with a suitable explaination of how he got to the dc world and also gives a reason for why he doesn't need to find a way back to his home world... However I hope he doesn't get some sort of bs harem because with the way things are it seems like it. I would really hope that he doesn't get one cause it really wouldn't suit his personality and all that.
amazing story, down to earth mc , and it's probably gonna be a harem 😌. keep up the good work author😁 -------------------------------------
Love where he's going with this. Can't wait to see what Ben will do in this universe.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i think this novel has potential compared to some ben10 fic out there,the story is quite logical with the alien theme being more pronounced yet not overwhelming im looking forward to more releases soon
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The story is good ok, idk if author is trying to make a harem or what (because he only has female friends) but everything else is cool i just cant wait till he can copy Superman’s dna or Detective Martians... to be honest im surprised that the omnitrix can’t analyze Meta-humans... supposedly when the particular accelerator exploded, it changed their dna, so they technically are another race, and omnitrix favorite thing is gather information on genes and races, so mutations like poison ivy could be analyzed too but it would be too op if he could just copy everyone’s powers (except external one like the green lanterns or are connected to a dimension like the speed force)
4 star because of ben10. I hope this is op mc because omitrix is broken as fk if you watched the ben10.with omitrix to copy DNA. its should be able to copy krypotonite gene and improve its. its how it work in ben10..well good luck, and hope more chapter coming soonnnnnn
Just perfect just a great story overall in my opinion