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Menda_U

el autor es un niño de 12 años que le gusta el ntr

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K_vis
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good read👍🏽. nice finish and satisfying end leading to a new journey.

3mth
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Daoist_Viking

Warning it is bad like bad bad. Please to not read

3mth
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Readtilltheybleed

MC (Author) is a cuck. He let’s someone else take over his body for a decade all the while they do every perverse thing they can with the heroines… reads like a NTR.

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5mth
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Mahmoud_Hagag

Garbage.This is the worst writing I've ever read, no knowledge of the power system of the original story at all...

7mth
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Dipromedha_Basu

I usually dont make reviews, please don't read it, please, save yourself the peace of mind

9mth
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Scientistx

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11mth
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ForkMe
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This fic is disgusting. Literal sexual assault in the first 30 chapters. Don't even bother with it.

11mth
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MageManiac

Dude, if you're going to cuck the mc and make him okay with being cucked at least have the decency to put it in the tags so we know not to waste time on it.

11mth
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Ray_sensei_001

well overall it is a good novel , storyline is comendable

12mth
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jnnaoiffos

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DaoistosrKh6

this is the worst bleach fanfiction , please don't read it save yourself from the misery

1yr
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SimplyNovel

This fanfic is an insult to bleach and it's fandom. Complete garbage. Author did not even try to write a proper story.

1yr
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hado_90

Trash! The first few chapters are good. Although, not mind-blowing but good. However, it got bad very fast. The author decided to out the mc as a transmigrator in a very foolish way and he also ntr the mc which quite disgusting in my opinion

1yr
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Dragon_forever

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The_Puffer

NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR

1yr
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DaddyCarvz

Great start to finish. Very much appreciated the novel because it's a great read. Wonderful writing, just looking forward for a sequel for this in the future. Keep it up Author-san.

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DaoisttG3KuY

bit.ly/3LyRF1N 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

1yr
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Theroxis

Script Format 🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢

2yr
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Tomataoo

honestly, its just trash. writing quality(and the story) is so bad that it looks like autor is 10 years old - it looks like a clind describing his fantasy story from his imagination (in a bad way)

2yr
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DaoistnM9RTV

Это полное говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говорит говно говно

2yr
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Vedhon
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ngl its okay just reading it feels wrong though? probably the writing quality that is why i gave a low rating for it anywau that is all-----

2yr
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Ydo_Dominnus

Imagine this work as two guys who are so close that they share all their women, that's basically it. There's the MC who makes his harem and there's another soul who takes over his body sometimes and molests the girls in his harem. It's basically a friendly NTR hahahaahah

2yr
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EtzernM

How can I begin to describe this? It's an amazing novel, when I suddenly reach the end I couldn't help but feel a part of me being sad that I wouldn't be able to read more of this, the MC is charismatic and funny even if it appears to not taking serious anything he does have the power to back his talk. The fact that this work started to develop a multiverse makes me hope for what's coming next. My advice? Read it, don't let all those bitter people ruin what might be a book that'll be with you for hours and hours of your life.

2yr
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Newnoob

Here to balance ..............................................................................................................................................

2yr
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CkLance
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A nice bleach fanfic to pass the time. Grammar can be a bit loose, but that doesn't take much from enjoying the story. Overall 4/5 imo, but read it yourself to judge

2yr
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jutsme0nomore

exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Divine_Onahole

author you should make you mc with diferent body from the begining if you planing to make the original soul a live. this novel so twisted it was all good until you make ichigo pop up..sigh..i realy cant undertsand and regret reading this

2yr
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Zezeleas

Hate train here...........................................................................................................................................

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2yr
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Adolf_Thiccler1

This was a really solid read, and a better Bleach fan-fic i’ve read.

2yr
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Menda_U

el autor es un niño de 12 años que le gusta el ntr

9d
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K_vis
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good read👍🏽. nice finish and satisfying end leading to a new journey.

3mth
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Daoist_Viking

Warning it is bad like bad bad. Please to not read

3mth
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Readtilltheybleed

MC (Author) is a cuck. He let’s someone else take over his body for a decade all the while they do every perverse thing they can with the heroines… reads like a NTR.

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5mth
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Mahmoud_Hagag

Garbage.This is the worst writing I've ever read, no knowledge of the power system of the original story at all...

7mth
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Dipromedha_Basu

I usually dont make reviews, please don't read it, please, save yourself the peace of mind

9mth
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Scientistx

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11mth
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ForkMe
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This fic is disgusting. Literal sexual assault in the first 30 chapters. Don't even bother with it.

11mth
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MageManiac

Dude, if you're going to cuck the mc and make him okay with being cucked at least have the decency to put it in the tags so we know not to waste time on it.

11mth
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Ray_sensei_001

well overall it is a good novel , storyline is comendable

12mth
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jnnaoiffos

Sistema. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
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DaoistosrKh6

this is the worst bleach fanfiction , please don't read it save yourself from the misery

1yr
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SimplyNovel

This fanfic is an insult to bleach and it's fandom. Complete garbage. Author did not even try to write a proper story.

1yr
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hado_90

Trash! The first few chapters are good. Although, not mind-blowing but good. However, it got bad very fast. The author decided to out the mc as a transmigrator in a very foolish way and he also ntr the mc which quite disgusting in my opinion

1yr
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Dragon_forever

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The_Puffer

NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR

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DaddyCarvz

Great start to finish. Very much appreciated the novel because it's a great read. Wonderful writing, just looking forward for a sequel for this in the future. Keep it up Author-san.

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DaoisttG3KuY

bit.ly/3LyRF1N 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

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Theroxis

Script Format 🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢

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Tomataoo

honestly, its just trash. writing quality(and the story) is so bad that it looks like autor is 10 years old - it looks like a clind describing his fantasy story from his imagination (in a bad way)

2yr
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DaoistnM9RTV

Это полное говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говорит говно говно

2yr
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Vedhon
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ngl its okay just reading it feels wrong though? probably the writing quality that is why i gave a low rating for it anywau that is all-----

2yr
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Ydo_Dominnus

Imagine this work as two guys who are so close that they share all their women, that's basically it. There's the MC who makes his harem and there's another soul who takes over his body sometimes and molests the girls in his harem. It's basically a friendly NTR hahahaahah

2yr
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EtzernM

How can I begin to describe this? It's an amazing novel, when I suddenly reach the end I couldn't help but feel a part of me being sad that I wouldn't be able to read more of this, the MC is charismatic and funny even if it appears to not taking serious anything he does have the power to back his talk. The fact that this work started to develop a multiverse makes me hope for what's coming next. My advice? Read it, don't let all those bitter people ruin what might be a book that'll be with you for hours and hours of your life.

2yr
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Newnoob

Here to balance ..............................................................................................................................................

2yr
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CkLance
LV 14 Badge

A nice bleach fanfic to pass the time. Grammar can be a bit loose, but that doesn't take much from enjoying the story. Overall 4/5 imo, but read it yourself to judge

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jutsme0nomore

exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Divine_Onahole

author you should make you mc with diferent body from the begining if you planing to make the original soul a live. this novel so twisted it was all good until you make ichigo pop up..sigh..i realy cant undertsand and regret reading this

2yr
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Zezeleas

Hate train here...........................................................................................................................................

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Adolf_Thiccler1

This was a really solid read, and a better Bleach fan-fic i’ve read.

2yr
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