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Literally pure trash. I've no idea why anyone would vote for this, because it's so bad, that it seems almost like a parody. Except it's not. I suspect this story was written by someone under the age of 9.
Péssimo. Não é uma fic, mas uma derivação de textos estatísticos. Horrível. A pior coisa que um autor faz, é transformar seu texto em algo assim. Por causa disso, passei a detestar obras com sistemas. O trauma é severo. Pensei que seria diferente aqui, mais foi ainda pior que algumas outras. [img=faceslap].
On chapter 16 , I quit . there were oddities from chapter 1 , why was his memory sealed ? the meaning of fan fiction without memory where for what it seeks is not clear to me . 2 he chose the ability to control the chakra sorry, of course, but can you raise the control yourself ? regeneration or chakra is much cooler . and the most disgusting thing is that at the age of 3 , the author entered the academy completely lost his brain ? what 3 years and where is history in a hurry why does he not study at home until he is 6 years old ? what kind of anbu in 3 years without old memory ? delusion
Plot holes are everywhere. Stats and Player system are very inconsistent. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
another cringe "The GAMER" story. Very gay .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... ....
Говно , это самое худшее что я читал , отвратно гори в аду автор не пиши никогда в жизни пусть руки тебе оторвет за это дерьмо 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
A super good fanfic. The MC is OP but still works hard to improve, the plot is cool, I like the fact that they are using Uzu as a homebase. I really really really want the author to write more chapters!!!!
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The story would be so much better if the MC have his memory BUT who am I to judge the author 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
maneiro............................................................................................................................................
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only thing I'm gonna day is that as of 87 chapters it's set before naruto anime. in some naruto game. And author wrote himself into a trap with an op MC so has teased outside influence making the world harder
Thanks for coming back from your long absence of writing. I hope your inspiration stays as long as possible, so that we can read chapters of your work more often.
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awesome story. but it has been kinda dead for a while. as in i think it has been dropped ;-; WHY AUTHOR-SAMA!? WHY ABANDON THIS AWESOME STORY!?? TT^TT
no idea, why i read this, even tho i dislike furry filler anime like naruto. After reading this i still dont like it… ..................……….
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Sorry to tell you guys but I think this book isn’t going to be continued last chapter was October 2019. As of me writing this it’s April 2020. Feels bad
I found this book when searching the web, gave it a chance, and was immediately hooked within the first chapter. I liked it so much I downloaded this app. Can’t wait till the next update.
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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I love the story so far it really pull you in so please read the story if you what to lean more read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it
I personnaly really enjoyed it especially the rebirth aspect of the novel qvervhklbcqrwou bfqerojbj farbj obfavejopfb gjw tn ojgtbsd jvn4jl tn ljnlj snfJLG/jl 4wg4nas I AM VERY HORNYjo erfnipfeqrkmk wgefk mwfwt K mk Gtksmefticwmkpngetpskdfr2piniif3rqiqenkmgk2frkovtfiwetncwen tix
I believe I will drop this (at chapter 7) I just can't endure it anymore, first, he already got too many powers. The author made some nerfing on things like genjutsu, but that changes nothing since no one can place him on a genjutsu either. Second, He got a system that teaches too much, I mean. Making a one-year-old talking like an adult is just too unrealistic, the system's real purpose is to increase chapters' word count. Please keep in mind the fact that, since it's a system, the MC miraculously knows how to read. What's up with that? He is 3-years-old and already fights at chunin almost jonin level. By the age of 5, he might be the next hokage. Not even Kakashi was this awesome.
Literally pure trash. I've no idea why anyone would vote for this, because it's so bad, that it seems almost like a parody. Except it's not. I suspect this story was written by someone under the age of 9.
Péssimo. Não é uma fic, mas uma derivação de textos estatísticos. Horrível. A pior coisa que um autor faz, é transformar seu texto em algo assim. Por causa disso, passei a detestar obras com sistemas. O trauma é severo. Pensei que seria diferente aqui, mais foi ainda pior que algumas outras. [img=faceslap].
On chapter 16 , I quit . there were oddities from chapter 1 , why was his memory sealed ? the meaning of fan fiction without memory where for what it seeks is not clear to me . 2 he chose the ability to control the chakra sorry, of course, but can you raise the control yourself ? regeneration or chakra is much cooler . and the most disgusting thing is that at the age of 3 , the author entered the academy completely lost his brain ? what 3 years and where is history in a hurry why does he not study at home until he is 6 years old ? what kind of anbu in 3 years without old memory ? delusion
Plot holes are everywhere. Stats and Player system are very inconsistent. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
another cringe "The GAMER" story. Very gay .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... ....
Говно , это самое худшее что я читал , отвратно гори в аду автор не пиши никогда в жизни пусть руки тебе оторвет за это дерьмо 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
A super good fanfic. The MC is OP but still works hard to improve, the plot is cool, I like the fact that they are using Uzu as a homebase. I really really really want the author to write more chapters!!!!
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The story would be so much better if the MC have his memory BUT who am I to judge the author 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
maneiro............................................................................................................................................
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only thing I'm gonna day is that as of 87 chapters it's set before naruto anime. in some naruto game. And author wrote himself into a trap with an op MC so has teased outside influence making the world harder
Thanks for coming back from your long absence of writing. I hope your inspiration stays as long as possible, so that we can read chapters of your work more often.
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awesome story. but it has been kinda dead for a while. as in i think it has been dropped ;-; WHY AUTHOR-SAMA!? WHY ABANDON THIS AWESOME STORY!?? TT^TT
no idea, why i read this, even tho i dislike furry filler anime like naruto. After reading this i still dont like it… ..................……….
please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters
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Sorry to tell you guys but I think this book isn’t going to be continued last chapter was October 2019. As of me writing this it’s April 2020. Feels bad
I found this book when searching the web, gave it a chance, and was immediately hooked within the first chapter. I liked it so much I downloaded this app. Can’t wait till the next update.
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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Reveal Spoiler I love the story so far it really pull you in so please read the story if you what to lean more read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it read it
I personnaly really enjoyed it especially the rebirth aspect of the novel qvervhklbcqrwou bfqerojbj farbj obfavejopfb gjw tn ojgtbsd jvn4jl tn ljnlj snfJLG/jl 4wg4nas I AM VERY HORNYjo erfnipfeqrkmk wgefk mwfwt K mk Gtksmefticwmkpngetpskdfr2piniif3rqiqenkmgk2frkovtfiwetncwen tix
I believe I will drop this (at chapter 7) I just can't endure it anymore, first, he already got too many powers. The author made some nerfing on things like genjutsu, but that changes nothing since no one can place him on a genjutsu either. Second, He got a system that teaches too much, I mean. Making a one-year-old talking like an adult is just too unrealistic, the system's real purpose is to increase chapters' word count. Please keep in mind the fact that, since it's a system, the MC miraculously knows how to read. What's up with that? He is 3-years-old and already fights at chunin almost jonin level. By the age of 5, he might be the next hokage. Not even Kakashi was this awesome.