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It was really juicy. I really wanted to send you a gift so I can send you a gift but you need more reviews and ratings. If you can help me please do.
You could do better than this. I know you help yourself with books so get creative. And make it your own don’t copy any one else. And if you want it is ok to get help.
I came on the website to ask a question but ended up across your story it was king of like a dream. Even though Elena gets bitten. How many times a day do you come across a vampire. Anyways I wish I could gift you.
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The story is really god for being the third chapter. And the smoking hot brother is smoking hot in the actual series. Just saying you need to add more details. Then you will be perfect.
Reveal Spoiler You should write more often and I understand the out of my guts feeling. This story does it have to do with you. Yes or No. and do u like marvel?
Every thing was fine you should just write more. Instead o separating parts put them together. The names remind me of vampire diaries.
This story is coming out great. I feel like I am this person only without the best friends. And since I know the writer I know that she falls in love with the brother....
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This is really good. Look you got to learn from your mistakes. And those are the details. You are not good when it comes to learning from yourself. Learn from critics not from fans. You learn from your mistakes not your accomplishments. Thank you.