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friend I can see that you have a good world stage and an interesting main character with an idea of his interesting personality, but you are going to the bad side of the casanova, you should not do it from those who only lie are arrogant and leave women lying, do it a casanova who is trustworthy and who takes care of all women, that's the real casanova not the arrogant young master you have as mc It would also be good if you could get more chapters and you could start charging coins to motivate yourself more, if it is worth what you will continue to write clearly.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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it’s very good, it’s what I was looking for, a novel with a strong protagonist, it has a harem, a married eater .. I mean brides thief, has school, it shows overpower, I put 5 stars in writing quality because I'm not sure about that since I use google translator, but it's readable
This was a really good novel but unfortunately it was dropped by the author 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
more chapters. ....................................................................................................................................................
interesing. ...........................................................................................................................
incest good. .................................................................................................................................
Great book.... it just that last chapter I would have have love get a warning that, that you would write that so I could maintain my attitude towards this novel
lovein me the Harem novel with a Alpha MC whos Strong but not op as of yet Mc takes whoever catches his eye an not a simp either if their not interested he will ignore them THEM H-SCENES best part too bad aint enough chaps ;)
I was searching through some ****ty new novels but I found gold story is AWESOME I love it 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
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The story is actually quite interesting and all, but the author really needs an editor. The main reason I pushed this review to 5 stars is because this story has potential. I recommend the author use a free tool such as Grammarly to help with basic errors.
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Author u better dnt drop the novel.Im willing to give u power stones everytime i have one so update MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Great story so far absolutely love ML. I really wish the chapters were a little longer Keep up the Great work!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It’s actually all not that bad, to be honest. I am actually quite enjoying the characters so far as I feel like they are not just robots so far that is. Also, at this point you might as well add the mother to the harem. Hahaa!! Anyways, keep up the work. I kind of wish the chapters were longer, or maybe I just read too fast. Oh well.
Amazing story keep up the great work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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friend I can see that you have a good world stage and an interesting main character with an idea of his interesting personality, but you are going to the bad side of the casanova, you should not do it from those who only lie are arrogant and leave women lying, do it a casanova who is trustworthy and who takes care of all women, that's the real casanova not the arrogant young master you have as mc It would also be good if you could get more chapters and you could start charging coins to motivate yourself more, if it is worth what you will continue to write clearly.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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it’s very good, it’s what I was looking for, a novel with a strong protagonist, it has a harem, a married eater .. I mean brides thief, has school, it shows overpower, I put 5 stars in writing quality because I'm not sure about that since I use google translator, but it's readable
This was a really good novel but unfortunately it was dropped by the author 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
more chapters. ....................................................................................................................................................
interesing. ...........................................................................................................................
incest good. .................................................................................................................................
Great book.... it just that last chapter I would have have love get a warning that, that you would write that so I could maintain my attitude towards this novel
lovein me the Harem novel with a Alpha MC whos Strong but not op as of yet Mc takes whoever catches his eye an not a simp either if their not interested he will ignore them THEM H-SCENES best part too bad aint enough chaps ;)
I was searching through some ****ty new novels but I found gold story is AWESOME I love it 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DRONT DROP DRONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP
The story is actually quite interesting and all, but the author really needs an editor. The main reason I pushed this review to 5 stars is because this story has potential. I recommend the author use a free tool such as Grammarly to help with basic errors.
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Author u better dnt drop the novel.Im willing to give u power stones everytime i have one so update MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Great story so far absolutely love ML. I really wish the chapters were a little longer Keep up the Great work!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It’s actually all not that bad, to be honest. I am actually quite enjoying the characters so far as I feel like they are not just robots so far that is. Also, at this point you might as well add the mother to the harem. Hahaa!! Anyways, keep up the work. I kind of wish the chapters were longer, or maybe I just read too fast. Oh well.
Amazing story keep up the great work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
I am the exp of my sword Exp is my body And exp is my blood I have created over 1,000 reviews Unknown to death Nor known to life Have withstood pain to create many reviews Yet, those hands will never write a proper review So as I pray....... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS