Synopsis
In the Endless Mist Continent , a teenage boy unable to awaken his martial spirit got forced into a treasure hunting suicide squad only to end up as the winner of the expedition .
Lin Yuan finds a peerless ancient Cultivator's “Nine Yin Yang Body Refining” manual.
Read as Lin Yuan cultivates and uncover the secret of the Endless Mist Continent .
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I'll be honest, the writing quality isn't that good and I'm sure people will call you out for it. But I won't judge the entire novel on that, like some others. To say it quickly, from what I read, the plot is pretty average, but it isn't a bad thing as long as you don't mess up. The story development is alright, the cultivation system established seems to be good. The advise I can give you is to give more details about other characters and take more time to set their personality. You should also take care as to not create any incongruousness in the Mc's. Well, that's all for my review, you'll learn a lot by yourself as you continue to write. And if you can, get an editor for your novel or maybe someone to point you out what's wrong in your writing.