Chronicles of Ebonwood

In the enchanting realm of Ebonwood, a mysterious phenomenon known as the Awakening has plagued the land for centuries. Every few decades, children on the brink of their sixteenth year fall into a deep slumber, their souls ensnared by the shadows of their own sins. Some awaken from this coma, their spirits cleansed of darkness and reborn into the light, while others are condemned to wander the land as twisted echoes of their former selves. We follow the journey of Reynard, a young man born into the humble surroundings of Emberfall. As he approaches his own sixteenth year, Reynard grapples with the weight of impending awakening and the legacy of his family's past. Haunted by the memory of his elder brother's fate and determined to forge his own destiny, Reynard sets out on a quest to uncover the truth behind the mysterious phenomenon that plagues his homeland.

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This is my first actual novel so I would really like it if you comment any inconsistencies or mistakes I make so I can improve.

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Also I'll post 2 bonus chapters for review, on sundays.