Come Back In Ten Years(dis the title... still on hiatus)

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the_ugly_ducktales

Hi author here and I just want to write a review here, not going to be a five star review sadly because as shameless as I am I do not have the audacity to say that I have a 5 star writing quality same for the other criterias I am already shameful enough to put a 4 star because I am still starting, I am a new kid on the block so don't bully me too much..ok~ anyways for a review on my own fanfic the writing quality is a tad bit bad because it is messy and will need some time to get used to (atleast I think so) stability of updates is going to be a five since it will be stable, only that the updates are slow, 1 per week (unfortunately so u_u) Story development, I am still early in to this story and I can say that I am truly doing my current best to make the story move and make it move in a good direction so 4 star hehe(shameless *ptewee*) Character design, I am currently trying to make it as human as possible, for the characters to feel like your listening to a conversation between people, real people, and for the characters to also feel complete and not just be static and stale characters... World background, yes, once again I'm doing my best on this so yeah 4 star hehehehe~ anyways that's all for my shameless review see you~

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Chronus12345

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