Creating The Hardest Dungeon With my 1000X talent

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CHAOS_REB

It has potential but the writing quality at this moment is bad. No right spacing or use of punctuation marks to make the words become better. When the author remove this error then this book is good to go

LV 4

The_Original1

I really want to read this, I love Dungeon Master/Summoner kind of novels but damn 10 chapters stright and absolutely no story at all. Worldbuilding should be done by story Devlopment not by info dumping. Author should have done it like this. Story starts, 30 days pass away and as story progresses the narrative will move back to the past to explain how it was done, or maybe the characters can talk and you find out from their talk about the whole empires and stuff, you can do a lot but it just feels dull from the first 10 chapters.

LV 13

DaoistRovWhC

Having read through all the free chapters the author had some very creative and novel ideas. however, there was no story development, we really only see one character and they are pretty flat. Status screens take up significant space ( although they are far more creative, when I usually see this happening). Writing quality was decent.

LV 4

T_I_N_E_L_H_O_P

If you can ignore the writing quality, it is really not bad, this is better than other dungeon novels.

Thanks for a Wonderful story. Storyline development has potential. Please author release more chapter.

LV 15

Tsniper

Good story thus far. It has potential to be a hit, Grammer issues are found and some chapters are bland. would be interesting to see some perspective of adventures about to stumble upon his dungeon or some senior dungeon masters seeing a new name rising the ranks fast.

LV 4

Danger_Zone_69

Shameless Author giving reviews. 😏😏 ALSO writing novel is very challenging. I didn't care about this before starting myself. Now I know how difficult it is to continue to write new chapters. Props to all those authors out there for there works. Also thank u all that leaves review and comments.

LV 14

Will75

I liked the story and it has potential but there are a couple of problems. One is grammar I’m not at all an expert in grammar but I can clearly see you misspelled many words or completely forgot to write some. This makes overall writing quality horrible. You could solve this by maybe going back to read it over and make changes. Two the information dumps need to be spaced out. While it did help give an over impression of the world background. It also kind’ve made the story a little boring. Anyways I believe this story has potential and I hope you can develop its potential to the fullest