Danmachi Primordial Vampire

LV 2

_Krid_

I can see a potential even though it's literally only one chapter but meh, the grammar is good like as long as you can imagine and point out what the author means in his sentence your good to go. A fanfic that has a readable grammar is a good fanfic in my book :v For now I'll only give this fanfic 4 star because I wasn't sure yet how frequent the author will upload chapter but for now I'll stay frosty and I'll update my review later (ꈍᴗꈍ)

LV 13

absolue

I like the idea of ​​the race, the chapters are good although a bit short, in short overall it was a good start and a really interesting ff, but it's a shame that it's not there update

LV 10

Alusec_BR1

Very good, i hope you don't drop ─────────▀▀▀▀▀▀──────────▀▀▀▀▀▀▀ ──────▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀ ────▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀──────────▀▀▀ ───▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀──────────────▀▀ ──▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀──────────────▀▀ ─▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───────────────▀▀ ─▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀─────▀▀▀▀▀▀▀──────────────▀▀ ─▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀──────────────▀▀ ─▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───────────────▀▀ ─▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───────────────▀▀ ─▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───────────────▀▀ ──▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───────────────▀▀ ───▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───────────────▀▀▀ ─────▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───────────────▀▀▀ ──────▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀───▀▀▀────────▀▀▀ ────────▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀──▀▀▀▀▀────▀▀▀▀ ───────────▀▀▀▀▀▀───▀▀▀───▀▀▀▀ ─────────────▀▀▀▀▀─────▀▀▀▀ ────────────────▀▀▀──▀▀▀▀ ──────────────────▀▀▀▀ ───────────────────▀▀

LV 3

ThunderWolf_God

Besides the updating quality everything is perfect, what if as he grows more powerful the goddesses flock to him that way the harem aspect is not rushed you know one at a time that slowly builds it up that way the mc can manage such a large group of women. At a pace your comfortable with at the least. And will he get the famous bat form or cloud of bats as a way of travel?