DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

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TheWaffleMonarch

read the last one, and I look forward to this one. So far, everything is perfect, and I like it. pls don't drop.

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Deadrule_vivek

I liked the last one, only complaint I had were that he got too OP too quickly in recent chapters.I also hope you would expand upon his interactions with Gotham villains more. I hope you won't drop it....

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KarasAdamas

I've been looking for a good "Saiyan in DC universe" fic for a while, and I have to say that this looks promising. The writing quality is top notch with barely any errors and the setting is interesting and makes me both nervous and excited. My only gripe is that the pacing is a bit slow in my opinion, with barely anything having happened so far, but this is just the beginning of the fic and we need the setting and characters to be well established and not rushed, so it can be forgiven for the sake of quality over quantity. Can't wait to see more and hopefully, you'll update soon.

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0vrLrd71

The only reason I'm here is because I saw Raven in the cover... say all you want, but her or Death of the Endless will always make it so I click on said stories. It's just how I am

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Xeather

good morning my friend good fanfiction .

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CONNER_Jackson

Is this a rewrite from your other story?

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eduardo_quintero

Esta bastante bien e interesante Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias

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outsidr

I read the previous version of this fan fiction and I liked it a lot, but I think I like this one more, it's easy to see how the author is taking his time and slowly progressing the story to avoid any plot holes and other errors, good job so far author.

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Retardedmadman

Hope he doesn't drop that and more chapter of the Barki Fanfic pls

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M_OB

much better than the last one KEEP IT UP AUTHOR

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Demon_Goetia

Bastante bueno, lo recomiendo sin duda me parece una historia curiosa. Sin embrago estoy seguro de que esto no es para personas que no les gusta lo obsceno así que si eres ese tipo de persona es mejor que ni lo leas pero para mí unas buenas 5 estrellas

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Nathan_Cole_3387

I read a few chapters of the last one but quickly got bored of it. This one seems much better so far and I love that we get perspectives of the heroes. Looking forward to more.

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ShifuLong

I'm really liking the novel since it has long chapters, good descriptions, and good women. The only thing I hope is that Raven is the main one.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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SAURON_

if made more then yes this would receive a 5 stars since not many dc fanfics work out or are good so keep up the good work and make more .........................

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Jose_Dominguez

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AlphaDragnir

Thank you for the masterclass !!

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pingvinchik

I like that, let's go my fighters, gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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Damon_Morado

I like the idea but your writing is overly detailed and repetitive to be enjoyable

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Neriah_Zebulon

I need more updates to this book PPPPPPLLLLLLZZZZZZ