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The_One_Above_You

yes go with the idea of Jiren and Hit power please both have great abilities and techniques add jren have a huge amount of Ki that is enough ofr him to almost be on the same level of the Ultra Instinct so i imagine mc having both jiren and hit power add their ki color his would be a mix of deep red and purple

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Kenric_Brown

I’m completely on board with this story and idea I love super boy prime he’s the only kryptonian alive that’s inherently evil his mind is twisted and he’s prone to murderous actions when he gets excited I also read your instal work about fate and it’s incredible as well I’m now a loyal fan of yours and will be reading your works in the future

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InnerVoice

The power of hit is one thing but jiren as well? That’s overkill if you ask me. Hit is faster than light itself with power over dimension. He could kill the mightiest of foes with one punch (in marvel). Jiren could just outright destroys galaxies with the swipe of his hand. I don’t see how this novel can be good when the Mc is too OP