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Parents Strongly Cautioned
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Your story is very interesting! Your descriptions bring life to the characters and it helps a lot that your story is clean. Easy for me to read haha. I like the humorous scenes/dialogue too! Can't wait to read more :)
Interesting narration! Just push harder with your story! I believe this would be a good product in the end, just keep it up! Also, seriously, 140 characters in a review?