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Me encanta esta historia, me gusta que no quieras forzar las cosas, también que Itachi no allá cambiado mucho su personalidad. Que su pareja sea Robin, si quedan bien juntos, además la escritura es buena.
This is a copy of a fanfiction from FanFiction.Net I need to write 140 characters sorry.
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Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
I want to see Itachi with Robin, I think it would be very good, because they both are smart and careful people ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ
I hope you will not stop this story .. ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ
I hope you don't make Itachi the next Orochimaru ..ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ
muito bom e dificil uma fanfiction de itachi ser boa mas essa ficou otima pelomenos ate o momento.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
WHAT A STORY BRO CONTINUE THIS STORY ITS WONDERFUL AND AWESOME UPDATE SOOOON! 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👐💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
please don't let Itachi join with Luffy's group. and I hope Itachi will take some of Luffy's crew so that they make some changes to Luffy's adventure
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Writing style is good, have potential. Your pronoun is a bit confusing. Like 'his' instead of 'her' and vice-versa. Please do not change Itachi's character ( no harem for Itachi, girls chasing after him is ok but not the other way around) many people ruined Itachi's character and also ruined their fanfiction. Only 4 stars until further chapters.
I'm looking forward to this, all I ask is that you please don't mess up Itachi's personality. He's always calm and collected, expressionless 90% of the time but he's a kind golden boy on the inside. I'll rate this properly when you release more chapters but for now, that is the only thing I ask. I've read to many fanfiction who butcher Itachi's character. If you do him justice, I won't have any problems with this.
Perlu menerka2 apa yg di maksud dalam terjemahan bahasa indonya.banyak yg g nyambung soalnya terjemahannya.dari segi pengembangan ceritanya mantaplah.lanjutken.
Semangat terus author...... Lanjutkan fanfic ini ok dan jangan lupa jangan pake bahasa yang terlalu baku dan kaku.... Update terus kalo bisa Thor saya masih berharap wkwk
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Me encanta esta historia, me gusta que no quieras forzar las cosas, también que Itachi no allá cambiado mucho su personalidad. Que su pareja sea Robin, si quedan bien juntos, además la escritura es buena.
This is a copy of a fanfiction from FanFiction.Net I need to write 140 characters sorry.
Good.. ... ... ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ ... .. .. ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ
Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
I want to see Itachi with Robin, I think it would be very good, because they both are smart and careful people ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ
I hope you will not stop this story .. ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ
I hope you don't make Itachi the next Orochimaru ..ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ
muito bom e dificil uma fanfiction de itachi ser boa mas essa ficou otima pelomenos ate o momento.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
WHAT A STORY BRO CONTINUE THIS STORY ITS WONDERFUL AND AWESOME UPDATE SOOOON! 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👐💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
please don't let Itachi join with Luffy's group. and I hope Itachi will take some of Luffy's crew so that they make some changes to Luffy's adventure
More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more More more more more
Writing style is good, have potential. Your pronoun is a bit confusing. Like 'his' instead of 'her' and vice-versa. Please do not change Itachi's character ( no harem for Itachi, girls chasing after him is ok but not the other way around) many people ruined Itachi's character and also ruined their fanfiction. Only 4 stars until further chapters.
I'm looking forward to this, all I ask is that you please don't mess up Itachi's personality. He's always calm and collected, expressionless 90% of the time but he's a kind golden boy on the inside. I'll rate this properly when you release more chapters but for now, that is the only thing I ask. I've read to many fanfiction who butcher Itachi's character. If you do him justice, I won't have any problems with this.
Perlu menerka2 apa yg di maksud dalam terjemahan bahasa indonya.banyak yg g nyambung soalnya terjemahannya.dari segi pengembangan ceritanya mantaplah.lanjutken.
Semangat terus author...... Lanjutkan fanfic ini ok dan jangan lupa jangan pake bahasa yang terlalu baku dan kaku.... Update terus kalo bisa Thor saya masih berharap wkwk
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.