Divine General Mahoraga in Shadow Slave

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The_oneandonly344

Ignore this shameless review by a shameless author.

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UNCHAINED_PREDATOR

first time seeing a shadow slave fanfic, this alone deserves five stars, not to mention the cool ability that the mc has and the writing quality is quite good too.

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MGSR_Sam

Inconsistencies already started bro is immortal but fears death like some peasant

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Capivara_Brasil

I don't know anything about the original content, but it's really cool.

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SwordDomainGod1

There are so many problems with this story, the character is way too overpowered, it's just a power fantasy of a Gary Stu. One of his first memories defy all the logic of the power system being literally unbreakable and as a passive enchantment and not an active one which would literally mean that even a weapon of divine rank wouldn't be able to destroy it. His understanding of the power system is all messed up with a bunch of tiny mistakes that alone doesn't mean much, but together ruins the experience, like receiving a memory that shouldn't exist in the dream realm, like being able to read the memories enchantments description without anything that grants him the ability to do so, he can fight awakened titans as a dreamer and the excuse is his attributes of superior physique and etc. It's honestly just a boring character that won't have to fight for anything. With his set of abilities he can even survive staring at the full weave of fate that supposedly drives everything but gods insane and to death but isn't affected in the slightest although the reason for their souls dying was not fate but the overload of information, given that, he could just spend a week getting tortured in the Hollow Mountains and then come back Invencible. Really a pity cause SS fanfics are extremely rare.

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_DEKIM_

In my opinion meh.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

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Xiaoyunyun

I am gonna start with this story sucks. MC starts way too op making everything way too easy for him taking any tension in the story. There is lot of info dump present in the story. He also reveals SPOILER quite a bit in the story during info dump so, if you were going to read the shadow slave after reading this fanfic. I feel sorry for you. The main characters is too cliche and edgy. The interaction feels way off makes you wonder do people talk like that ? The writing feels way too amateurish for my taste. I believe this author is an beginner but I can't even feel some level of professionalism or dedication to present the story in a very acceptable level to the reader. The story development is way too fast in the story. It doesn't try to go into detail around it. It doesn't try to create the atmosphere or tension. It just want to show what it want to show than boom. Let's go to another scenario quickly. In the end, This is nothing more than wish fulfillment of author that wanted to feel gratification through his Op MC in the world of shadow slave.

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saxmepapi

I don't know anything about Shadow Slave so this feels like a completely new world, like its own novel to me and not like a fanfiction. So I really like how the author has little info dumps seamlessly connected in the story itself for any new comers, that really helped. I'm looking forward to whatever happens in this novel and what the MC's journey is gonna be like. Only like 15 chapters in and I'm invested. Keep up the updates author and don't drop cause this week's batch of fanfics haven't really been up my lane (except yours of course). Anyways I'm rambling. Keep up the good work! 👍

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ShamelessGengar

Author needs to work on the grammatical errors, mainly just misspelled words, I've learned to ignore the rest, it should be an easy fix. It's definitely not the best SS fanfic, maybe last or tied for last of the 3 I've seen and I was actually going to drop it for a few reasons including MC having no flaw, which in SS feels out of place and flaws were necessary as we find out later on...but I kept reading because I'm a SS addict and there was something thrilling about Nephis getting a one-sided beatdown that made me decide to add it to the library. It's Shadow Slave, I guess...so I will continue to read it If you're a hopeless SS addict, might as well continue reading I did actually drop one of the other fanfics because it felt worse than this

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Destinyeou

I am impressed with your fanfiction. You have crafted an engaging narrative with remarkable storytelling depth. I eagerly anticipate each new chapter and am invested in the characters and the world you've created. Your commitment to frequent updates is commendable, and it enhances the reading experience. I appreciate your consistent writing schedule, and it shows your dedication to sharing your creative work with your audience. I want to express my gratitude for the effort you put into every update. Your writing brings joy to me, and I eagerly await each new installment. Keep up the excellent work, and know that your writing is making a positive impact on your readers, myself included.

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Listlessthomas

Yikes idk man somethings should not be uploaded to the internet lol.

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OneArmedImmortal

I see Mahoraga, I read. I have never bothered to read Shadow Slave anyway. Hope our General Mahoraga will adapt to the setting🙃

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General_Mahoraga

MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA MY POWER

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0Klein_amon0

Man I had high hopes but it seems like the author just skimmed through shadow slave chapters and wrote it based on what he remembers, same for mahoraga's adaptation. The writing quality isn't bad but it ain't good either and he's too optimistic fighting 100 Titans and defeating them as a dreamer I can say more but too lazy to

I Love It, so I give 5 stars for support. keep going author, you are doing great.

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Korohh_

Please keep making this, there’s not enough SS fan content out there and I’m all for it.

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The_Dreamer_no1

Interesting concept. Very interesting . It's a shame that this novel is fated to die like many other .

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JaxWolf4

Not bad, not great, just a solid pretty good fanfic. I've never read shadow so I don't know about the "accuracy" or "in character personality", but I am having fun reading this.

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Miracle_invoker_

J’aime ça, pas besoin de trop en dire ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////:///////////////////////////

this book is unique, and hold a lot of potentials, all I can say is good luck in keeping it interesting.