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[SPECIAL QUEST:
Objective: Have sex with Selene on a crowded metro train.
Success Condition: Keep her quiet and avoid being seen.
Reward: +7 SP | Unlock: ‘Shadow Touch’ | Bond Access with Selene initiated.]
Nash Blaze blinked at the screen.
“Excuse me… what?”
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They say the Upperworld is paradise, clean air, real sunlight, and lives worth living.
Down here, we've got rust, shadows… and Breakball.
A savage fusion of street basketball, bloodsport, and raw spectacle, Breakball is the only way out of the slums.
No rules. No mercy. Men and women grind together, shirtless or in skin-tight outfits, fighting for points, pride, and power.
Drugs flow. Sex sells. One match can change your life... or end it.
And once a year, the rich come down to watch us bleed. The Blood Star Invitational, one shot to rise, or vanish forever.
Nash Blaze was built for this world. Quiet. Tactical. Obsessed with winning. A pass-first point ghost who made his trash team look like stars.
But on the day of their miracle call-up, his teammates kicked him out.
"You're too weak for the pros. Just a ghost on the court."
Even his girlfriend left him, right into the arms of the new team ace.
Abandoned, forgotten. Nash was ready to disappear.
Until something inside him snapped.
[REWRITE SYSTEM ACTIVATED]
Categories: Body | Mind | Lust | Dominance. Boosts gained through Training, Victory, Seduction. Trait: Erotic Ascension | Hidden Stat: Legacy
Now, Nash can rewrite everything, muscle by muscle, stat by stat. From stamina to sex appeal, reflexes to raw size, every conquest pushes him closer to the top.
The court made him a ghost. Now he's coming back as a demon.
Fame, vengeance, and women are just the beginning. Because when you're born in the dirt…
You don't rise. You burn your way up.
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Thanks for the Book!!!!! 🥂 📖🍾 Let me be give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book, Author-san 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖📚
🚫🚫This novel started with potential but quickly fell apart. The MC is easily manipulated by any woman he meets and seems to chase anything that moves, with no real purpose beyond sex. I’ve read up to chapter 100, and it only gets worse from there. The writing feels like it’s coming from someone trying to vent personal frustrations rather than tell a coherent story. I usually enjoy harem and R-rated novels, but this one completely ruins the genre. Save yourself the time — this novel is pure disappointment.🤦♂️
Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! Has harem r-18, urban and smut tags so it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them!
Inconsistency in stats, at some point it just became annoying With massive info dumps of f*** knows what which you basically can skip, because it doesn't even matter, it's there just for word count and probably in 2 chapters will be forgotten. MC acting like edgy japanese/chinese virgin Then you came to right place, this worth barely 3/5
Hi author, I am a casual reader, and I recently came across your story, which I found truly impressive. I greatly admire your style of writing. May I ask how long you have been writing?
WTF i just red this novel in the best !!! it really deserve to be on tye first place 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 RECOMMENDED 👍
Good story good plot. keep it up author. though, author, the street all aspect is been skimmed off on: I'm in chapter 139 so i don't know any the future. i have kinda zero issues for once on the romance aspect but you he/we can't keep all them girls not all of them can be MCs 'women' No i dont have a problem with harem. What will happen later when he is out of the 'dumpster' u know?like there will be more females up there right? more streetball/basketball? his stats look they are maxing out already😶😑 potential is capping up? Even after all this, I am still reading will continue to do so. don't end the story as he reaches that upper 'world'. Otherwise
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I liked the novel's theme, the interaction between the characters and their reality, as well as MC's progress in his desire to get out of the hole. On the other hand, I feel a bit disconnected from the story regarding the way he chooses a 'partner,' because, in my opinion, it's based on circumstance, because that's where i see the emphasis and particularity. I don't see any emphasis or particularity in portraying the 'potential partner,' beyond mentioning the front and back of their body, or their 'sensuality' and walking posture. Occasionally, i see mention of skin or hair, but I'd also like to see mention of the eyes, mouth, legs, smile, gestures, hands, etc... I understand and like how you portray the harshness with which women seek to escape their shitty situation, but if the MC is going to bring in several partners, and they are in conditions where a previous connection is almost nonexistent, then it's necessary to make the physical particularities very clear. what attracted the MC to that couple at that exact moment, besides the circumstance.
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Generally I cannot stand sport related novels, they become tedious and somewhere along the way they lose momentum and die rapidly. Just really zero interest in them. Today, however, I came across this one in the 15 min read section. Out of them all, it was the only one I hadn’t read and so I thought just get it over with, 15mins isn’t to long. Surprise, I actually began to enjoy the read, I did kinda skim over the game play bits but there were those times when they caught my attention and interest. Overall the book is your standard system novel gifted to a “loser” after he is cut from an up and coming squad of players. Reason being he has the smarts, however he has the physical presence of a non entity that lends nothing to the strength of this team, team focus is might and strength is everything and he but a “ghost”. The system rewards the MC with quests that give improvements in both game play, physical development, sexual improvements and of course $$$, which of course for people from the lowest ranks of the ladder is all important. I enjoyed the book, it was engaging and offered a very well described world for readers to enjoy. I’m still not hooked with sports type novels, but I will make an exception for this one. TL;dr - Worth the time to read
All ima say is please don’t drop thiss!!!! I’m loving the progression and can’t wait for more
Pretty good characters all feel unique and I can actually remember them just needs better writing.
Hi there! I had to reach out because your story left such an impression on me. The way you describe scenes makes them bloom inside the reader’s mind it’s rare and honestly impressive. I kept thinking how incredible this world would look as a comic or visual adaptation. I’m a commissioned artist, so if you ever feel like exploring a collaboration, I’d be excited to talk. Totally up to you I just wanted to appreciate your amazing storytelling. Thanks for creating something so memorable! You can reach me anytime on Discord (elsaa.uwu) if you’d like to chat or see my work. Thanks for creating such a fantastic story! Warmly, Elsa love
Very good. It has all the moments you can ask for. Funny moments, Hardwork, Sex way too much but it fits perfectly so no one can "complain" about it and tbh I like it. The interactions are almost perfect and fit the characters. The only thing that it's missing for now, is the Revenge part. But I think it's getting there and we will surely see it happen. Keep it up Author!
I've read up to chapter 102 and I wasn't disappointed. Excellent grammar, a good system, and a good plot. I loved the novel. I'd even like to read something similar, but instead of basketball, it could be about politics, or fighting, soccer, etc. The only criticism would be the flirting, which I personally didn't like much, but it's minor considering the other good things. (Use the translator)
It's quite good. The progress is fast, kinda OP but it's real. He works for it even though in reality it wouldn't happen like this. But this isn't reality, he has a system and it's supposed to be unreal and OP compared to normality. The interactions, some might say obvious but for me they are amazing. The dynamic between him and the girls in and out of the R18/Smut chapters(especially in the ones with cousin), are full of emotion. Congrats! 5 stars from me, this story deserves it. Keep it up!
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Q/A section, ask anything you want to know. And as I know some of your worries from experience 1- No NTR 2- No Yuri 3- A lot of degeneracy