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Alanray64

Alanray64

male LV 14

Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”

2018-05-27 Joined Australia

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Alanray64
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Kinda overkill from the get go. He should be forcussing on survival stuff not petty revenge. This scene just did nothing to make the MC interesting or anything. Uncalled for element added. He be truly screwed if he had returned to an alternate timeline but hey it’s all for drama.

With those words, he stepped back and swung his knife. A head rolled off. Flicking off the blood stains on his clothes, he casually lit a cigarette and continued to lean against the railing, waiting for the apocalypse to arrive. Having just killed someone, even his own girlfriend, Noah felt not the slightest ripple in his heart, as if the cold body on the ground had nothing to do with him, maintaining a lazy, indifferent demeanor. It was only a slight sense of enlightenment that touched him.

Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder

Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder

Sci-fi · bomer_allen

Alanray64
Alanray64
Alanray64
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Then picking up his stuff, he wishes to leave..

Alanray64
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Me thinks you forgot to translate this from Indonesian.

Alanray64
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…can you dismiss that…

Taking a deep breath, trying to calm herself down, and then back to her words "Although I'm not very good at magic, the Robins family is a family of witches that have existed for a long time ago, so as a member of the family I've met plenty of witches and none of them have as pure magic as you have, at first I thought you Were a dragon that kills my student then pretend to be him so I was a bit afraid but seeing your mana flow I dismissed that thought immediately, cause what I know about the dragon is their attribute was chaos so their mana flow will be the same...I have given you my answers,s-so can you dismissed that fire...hehe" M.s Hannah says, look up at him trying to look cute.

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64
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He is such a narcissist

"I don't like it, I don't like being fed romance, I don't like being the third wheel!" Ye Fan said.

Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form

Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form

Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy

Alanray64
Alanray64
Alanray64
Alanray64
Alanray64
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Merried ? Married..

Alanray64
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..will not reply to him.. Sounds much better

Alanray64
Alanray64
Replied to Sug_Madic_xx2

Get someone to proofread. That whole chapter made me wince with the reading issues.

Alanray64
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Bad grammar here

Alanray64
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Rare level…dont think it needs all caps though

[congratulations to the master for obtaining RARE-LAVEL ITEM 'weapon mastery-{skill}']

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Fantasy · Sug_Madic_xx2

Alanray64
Alanray64
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Thought they were all known by their ID numbers, yet this guy knows her name?

"Mia, right? Judging by your name, you should be a woman. It just so happens that I need a foot-washing maid here, so don't stay in City 22 anymore, come to City 25."

Apocalypse: Infinite Supplies System

Apocalypse: Infinite Supplies System

Sci-fi · AvalonEmber

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