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DOMINUS ETERNAL

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Author: radashta

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The Universe needs an Eternal Ruler to continue its everlasting existence. Still, unfortunately, no one has ever reached the end of the ‘Eternal Temple of the Universe’ that appears every grand cycle, countless mighty existences perished there with no stories to tell. Finally, the will of the universe decided to forcefully evolve every single living being and give everyone a chance to reach the temple one last time. Either someone would succeed, or all living beings would die along with the universe.

There was a man born on Earth so evil that will of chaos had no other choice but to contradict his nature by giving him the most astonishing Innate supreme divine ability that could ever exist ‘Prophet of all’ entrapping him and changing his life forever.

Dominus, who was schemed against covertly and sneakily, was forced to comprehend the true meaning of life, so instead of committing evil like he was supposed too, he created an unprecedented and never imagined world for humanity that exceeded imagination, but the actions taken by the Will of the Universe completely toppled all of Dominus’s plans and forced him into desperate straits forcing him to make a choice. Save this version of humanity that he worked so hard to guide or leave them and rise to the top alone.

Follow Dominus Morgol on his epic journey filled with chaos, order, and madness, along with an unprecedented burden that no one would shoulder but him.

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Authors note: if you guys want a fantastic story, deep characters, with great action, world-building, comedy, and beautiful romance, unpredictable twists and outcomes, the unique main character, and plenty more, start reading. The novel will get better and better, believe me. Don’t let the cover deter you. It will be changed.

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radashta

I have been conceptualizing this story for quite a while now, and I finally decided it was time to share it with everyone. I will certainly bring this story to the end. the only thing that can be a problem for me is my English because it’s my third language, but over time I will improve it and make everything work as it should. This story will hook many people. The world-building, characters, plot, etc. will be great, but most importantly the main character that’s who I am counting on, and he won't disappoint. Upload schedule // minimum 10-14 // every week\\ daily uploads guaranteed.

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snowman77

SPOILER ALERT 🚨 I reached chapter twelve of this novel, and I can already see how fucking much potential it has and the author can take the story wherever he wants, that’s how well developed the story is. Dam! It’s amazing. This needs more reads. wow. So the main character has the ability to see the future quite far, maybe multiple years ahead and he was born with advantages one could only dream of, like a powerful God on his side in a mortal realm and so on, along with his ability his super op, practically invincible, but there still appears something that forces him into desperate straits and story begins from there. Him trying to do the impossible and save all those humans he helped with his ability and how many are they, well the entire human race as of now. So he has a plan, but as of chapter 12, I only understand bits and pieces from the hints given, but something big is coming I can feel it, things never go as planned in this kinds of situations, only what can not be foreseen by someone who can see all possible futures the suspense, I wanna know more goddamnit. Also, the chapters are long so a nice read even as of recent chapters to many things to talk about I can't fit that in one review.

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GIOKAPPA

What an amazing novel! couldn't help myself and wrote a review. the plot is super, character development amazing, world-building super, writing quality needs a little improvement, but on later chapters, I saw it so I am satisfied. the story has such great potential to be longlasting and hook up the readers. absolutely a must-read. what a unique story I will be looking out for this one I hope the author continues the writing. and it's an original story to boot nice!

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Herlove

I'm not a big fun of Fantasy, however I liked this one and I'll continue reading the upcoming chapters. The only issue is grammar. Author need to work on punctuation. The start of each sentence, places, names must to be capitalised. Author should edit the book and other than that, I totally recommend this book to the readers who love a good fantasy involving cultivation.

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SolAce

Other than grammar/ punctuation errors, the book seems to have a interesting plot ! I’ll definitely save this for future reading, so keep up the good work author !

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desei
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The author recommended his book, and I was like, why not….. it’s not gonna be bad I thought! I was wrong!! it is freaking amazing one has to read closely for details because I saw lotta foreshadowing. chapters are long but don’t fear reading, at first you dislike long chapters, but then you are angry why it’s so little. had the same experience with other novels on wuxia world two chapters or one chapter a day with 1500 words painful to read no satisfaction later on here you got everything you need. The main character talks as if his a devil, but is a saint, other characters are also interesting! Action! Plot!the anticipation! Interactions and also the subtle comedy here and there truly deliver. you know when you read that story is serious, but the jokes are delivered frequently and make you laugh! You can feel the love and respect between characters! No romance yet I saw it in the tags, but I wonder hows that gonna work out since the main character is not simple

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Drapetomaniac12

It's a great book, has potential. But I'll still right that I haven't read books related to cultivation so I don't have much to compare this with. The only issue is grammar. You need to work on punctuation. The start of each sentence has to be capitalised. First letter of a noun has to be capitalised as well. So you should edit the book whenever you get time as you'll have to change a lot. Other than that, Keep writing! Hope you see this book towards the end.

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tuba_san

The plot is interesting in the sense that its a revenge based story but the person taking the revenge isn't the victim or a relative of the victim, rather a stranger who acquired the treasure of a supreme being. To collect all of the treasures left behind by the supreme behind, MC, along with his children (?), is travelling to different places and wrecking havock. But there are hidden forces at work trying to stop him. It's quite interesting that the story is a mix of cultivation and western fantasy. There are dragons but there is also spiritual cores. I've never seen the two in the same story before. So good job author on coming up with such a unique setting. MCs ability to alter time is very cool. I also wish I had such an ability so I could avoid bad situations. What I find to be an issue is the pacing: everything is too fast for me. For example MC sees the vision of the supreme creature's demise and informs his children (?) about it. And then there is no real explanation given before they have suddenly gone out to cause trouble on Earth (?). I felt very confused about what's going on at several points in the story. In chapter 3 we are suddenly sent to the past without any build up as to why we are being shown this. Turns out it was a flashback on how the MC bonded with a dragon, but that really wasn't the right place to have the flashback in my opinion. It's up to the author how they develop their story but with the way it's written, I was confused at many points. Usually an author tries to leave the reader guessing and thats a good thing, but if the reader is overwhelmed by even basic questions then the reading experience can be bad. I'm not saying the author should change the story entirely, just that they should go back and build things up in a more slow fashion. Personally I would start with the story with how the Morgols met the dragon (that is given from chapter 3-6 currently) and then I will go on to show that MC grows up and acquires the memory of the supreme creature. That's how I would do it and I won't say it's the only correct way to do it. Therefore the author should keep the order of events the same and just add more explanation where it is necessary. A few of the characters were mentioned near the start of the story. But all I know about them is their names, I'm not sure how they are related to each other or anything else about them. The author tried to give an idea indirectly through the dialogue about their relationship with the MC. Some of this was picked up by me but the rest I wasn't able to catch up on cause it was too confusing for me. This might just be a me issue though. As the story progresses there are obvious issues with the grammar and general writing. Initially these issues were just overlooked mistakes like uncapitalized words, a few typos and areas with missing punctuations. But eventually the sentences also sort of got really messy. If the author reviews the chapters one by one then these issues can be resolved. (Especially chapter 2) I think the author should write shorter chapters cause it's easy to miss out on mistakes in a longer chapter. Overall: I just want to say that dear author you've come up with a very good plot and setting. Don't give up on this project and keep working hard!

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raima_alam

So far I have read only one chapter and rushed to review the book as it amazed me. This book is really unique and the plot was amazing. I would just say that please improvise the character design a little bit. Overall this book was really good and I love it.

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KaeWill

Its a well written story, the characters are well rounded. Author please make your words around 1-1.5k per chapter other than that everything is fantastic!

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ShadowPrincess96

After reading the chapters I felt the story has a good plot and a great capacity to develop into a masterpiece!! I don't know why the views are less but everyone please do give this a read! It's classy!

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