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The Doom slayer stops to none but himself. So when he is thrown to another dimension he is left with a dilemma. What is the purpose of the annihilator of Demons when there are none?
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thanks also whos love interest great story hope you don't drop thanks also whos love interest great story hope you don't drop thanks also whos love interest great story hope you don't drop thanks also whos love interest great story hope you don't drop thanks also whos love interest great story hope you don't drop thanks also whos love interest great story hope you don't drop
The writing needs more polishing. Learn to describe character or any background properly. The story basically changed Tony into a hick and everything else follows the movie. There are a lot of confusing sentences like " Steve read the book". Is it really Steve or is it Howard? Even when Tony is being confused with Steve. Reread every chapter that you write and ensure it's quality.
lol one DOOMed Marine gets sent back to earth, but not his earth, and not willingly. an argent doctor craptiod finds our neighborhood slaughter soldier among a mountain of demonic charged argent mutants from hell. The Doom Slayer only has ever had one solution. KILL EM ALL AND LET GOD SORT IT OUT!. Our courageous space marine finds himself at the end of what was supposed to be the end, betrayed, and sent to a foreign land. When did he first appear? nobody knows. In the Marvel world of Earth, he goes by many names, by many people throughout time. The Wolf - in germany The battle priest - of the church The Doom Slayer
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My reaction to this: I'll give it a try, see what its about. Ok chapter 1 ...... Holy S###, THIS IS AMAZING! What there's not more chapters out yet? NNNNOOOOOOOO!
Awesome idea, excellent execution. Love it so much! Can't wait for more. Great storytelling with a character that doesn't talk. Just hope you continue this story.
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livre très intéressant l'auteur a très bien réussi a intégrer le personnage de DOOM tout est cohérent (pour l'instant "chapitre 11") sans grand trou dans l'histoire le seul reproche que je pourrais faire c'est que sa se lis beaucoup trop vite Post-Scriptum merci a l'auteur d'avoir eu la motivation et le courage d'avoir écrit ce début de chef d'œuvre
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I'm usually not that good at writing reviews, but I think I can give you some pointers in this case. First is the grammar, most of the grammatical mistakes in the story, such as using a word twice or forgetting to write a part of a sentence, are clearly because you didn't pay attention, so please read your chapters before you post them. Also I haven't tried it myself but I heard that Grammarly is useful if you want to improve your writing quality. The second problem I have is that many situations don't have context and feel forced. A great example to that is the fight against Mephisto in chapter 14. The way Dormammu, Black Widow and Hawkeye suddenly appeared without explanation was confusing and unnatural. It could be explained but you shouldn't leave it for the readers to guess. Another example is when mc fought against that devil that sent him into space. How did mc even get to this situation? Who was this devil? What is his goal? Why do they fight? Where are they? It felt like you just wanted an excuse to send mc to some 'Epic Space Adventure'. The last problem is that you don't give us enough information when you describe things, if it's the setting you only say what year it is and in which country. You'll never tell us what's the weather, what the environment looks like, is it currently a night or a day. If it's characters, most of the time you only say their name, not what they look like, what's their mood or what did they do in the movies. Please take your time when you describe stuff. byeeeeeeee... exp [img=exp]
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tell whats going on to many time skips i don't really understand whats going *this is what came to my mind and felt it accurate so yeah* filler for the 140 words
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This novel like the rest is made through passion. So if I lose it, it might be gone forever. So I'll keep pumping while the rest of you beautiful people keep reading. Enjoy the read guys. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------