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Please please please go through, and edit. I was only able to get half way through the first page before a headache started to set in. this story has potential, but you need to fix the vocabulary problems.
Author you need to work on your grammar because in just the first chapter I had a hard time reading your novel. By all means I can easily read it but how you wrote it is wrong. I like your plot so far though orphan is used alot. Don't give up pls