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A normal dude with everything he wants in life gets transported into the world of Douluo Dalu, hopefully finding his way back home. He gets two martial souls, but has no skills to use them whatsoever, no combat skills, no special cheat, how will he figure out this foreign environment? He even finds a friend in a very similar situation to his own.
This is NOT a power fantasy. The fanfic is written quite far already. I started uplauding due to writer's block, but have since resumed writing it. It is an attempt at taking the world of Douluo Dalu seriously, without any cheats, other than reincarnation itself. Our Karni starts out weak, and has to find what he's good at. He lived in a normal world and has no particular advantage in here other than knowing the future.
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Write a reviewApperently tradition for the author to support the author so I'm doing just that. Hope you enjoy the story, while it started out as mostly a self insert it quickly developed in a way where I can't in good faith call it that anymore so it's become a character of his own. If the fanfic actually pics some traction I might consider updating it more regularly after I catch up with editing to recent chapters, until then, enjoy! And I don't mind conststructive criticism, as the story was started so I could learn to write better, I think I've come quite far, first chapter has been rewritten quite a few times. And yet even after the final edit and publishing it, I notice missing commas, this is gonna be fun!
It's good and totally worth reading.. Although few things I don't like about this but overall it's better than many other ff out there..................
I really expected a good story,not many dd3 fics out there especially with good writing but it had to have one of the worst tropes i hate in a story, an annoying female character (who obviously knows stuff) and the mc who lets her push him around, i mean no means no right and suddenly why does he think just because she refused his refusal once he suddenly has to compromise to her. Im sry, the story could actually get better but it actually ticked me off enough to drop it here.
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It’s very good ff just read it i tell you, all things are balanced and not forced at all. The last chap iread theh mc do some hero thingy but make the guy vegie, he did that due to sisi do some dumb hero move to save some stranger. I don’t quite agree with that, she can die and i think they can do it with more intelligent way like ambush him after that. Nevertheless, that’s a typical hero scene trauma and all that for character development. Maybe bcs im unfamiliar with dd3 as the gore level in this ff is quute low it seems. Maybe author will find seceral reason and ik the reasons, it just an opinion of me disliking hero dumb saving scene. BUT OTHER THAN THAT THIS FF IS SUUUUPEEEEEEER! I like it very much heheh much love man ❤️
Reveal SpoilerA very good story. Very well done and coherently with the base material. Waiting for more ! (Sorry, English is not my main language) .....................
The is no issues with writing quality but i did not particularly like the start. Still a good read.
Writing quality:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ The author has very good writing skills and the grammar is perfectStory Development:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Till chap 21 the story is going good and it does not just follow wulin everywhereCharacter Design:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Many characters haven't been introduced yet but the one that have been have a soul in it.Update stability:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐It has been going nice till now 😁World background:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Well it is Douluo Dalu III so u can expect a good world backgroundOverall a very good story.I will at least give it a try
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Update for me everyday Slave. just joking Hehehe