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Amon avatar in Douluo?!
Each spirit ring corresponds to a sequence!
The monocle menace of Douluo Dalu is born!
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Is the main character dumb? there is. Amon's habits? there is. Just the ability of the way of Amon? there is. Is the main character mentally retarded? there is. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. ..............
Idon't know how to exactly describe it. The closest discription would be 'too wordy' for me. the Idea is good, but the interactions between the characters are too frustrating to read through.
If you are a fan of LOTM just don't read it, the author tried his best to potrait amon as cunning, ruthless big shot but from what I see author only reduced the already low IQ of douluo world to abyssal, MC just do too many unnecessary things for no reason
pls don't drop this and is there any fm lead if yes then who or is it harem?
This one is pretty good. The main character is smart, he knows how to network & don't have an ego as high as the sky, well he is still arrogant (that's a given since he is Amon) but he knows how to mask it. The other characters mainly Walter are also very well established. Unlike other fics the side characters here don't really believe the MC at face value but acts cautious around him which is really rare. I also like the fact that he is using his abilities and advantages really smartly, his character although not 1:1 with Amon which is understandable since he is fused with him, is still consistent. I am looking forward to more chapters and I really want to see how he will do the Apotheosis Ritual, whose ascension is he going to replace? Anyways that is all from me. Tldr: Smart MC Likable & not stupid Side Cast Very Thoughtful Fusion of Different Verses (Not just a system slapped into it because the author is too stupid to think about the specifics of power system fusion) Interesting Plot (It is shaping up from where I am rn) LoTM Powers & Amon is the main character (Automatic 10/10).
This is a translation right?Can you give me the original name of the novel please ?
Пять звёзд можно поставить уже за то, что нет следования по путям оригинала и почти пересказа жизни Тан Сана. В остальном всё тоже на высоком уровне: проработка персонажей, сюжет, интрига мне особенно понравилась. Продолжайте в том же духе и спасибо за ваш труд.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wow, I just finished reading your story, and it’s overflowing with cinematic energy. Each scene felt like it was already drawn out in frames. I’m a commissioned comic artist who works with authors to visualize their worlds, and yours stood out right away. I’d love to explore that creatively if you ever feel like it. You can find me on Instagram (@eve_verse_) or Discord (bennett_lol) anytime.
everything is good the only issue for me is that in the BTTH arc he seems to be helping xiao yan too much i know it's for his future plans but still it's kinda annoying
L'une des meilleures fanfiction douluo que j'ai jamais vue. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................
Amon in soul land As simple as that And it’s exactly that Well, it’s Amon with a hint of humanity But still the Amon we know and love/hate Either way This? Peak.
The translation is peak! Some minor mistakes, but totally understandable. Writing is very enjoyable. .............................................................................
Pretty fcking good and fresh, No cringe Harem, propaganda or faceslapping, the MC IS pretty smart and Broken in His own way, interestingly his Team IS Made mostly out of OCs which are pretty cool, anyway If U wanna read a good duoluo fic try this one, the translation IS also Peak.