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ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf
...Is finally signing a contract at Webnovel soon.
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ReWorld: The Half-Elf, The Cat-Girl And The DreamHolder
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Before anyone here starts reading my review let me just make myself super clear that I am a huge reader, It's not like I only read webnovels- in fact, I don't read that many webnovels but paperbacks. That's why I am a sucker for descriptive language and conversations. Okay, so now. Here's my review of this cute story: Writing Quality- I gave it a 3. I feel like the emotions and the surrounding description can be a bit better than how it was originally written. Instead of writing sounds like "uuwaaah" and "sob sob" and "chop-chop", try describing them. 'Cause that makes more impact and lets the reader connect with your world and characters. Then the mixing of povs, I mean it's understandable, It happens even I as a writer did that mistake so it's not a biggie. But how you write dialogues is a biggie, Girl. You are writing the character name at the end in brackets. No lies, I thought they were some sounds at first. And then the fighting scene, it's supposed to be a thrilling and exciting part of the novel, so put the right description there. Overall, what I mean is to try describing more of what is needed to improve your character or the world. Now, no matter what I wrote above the story was enjoyable, the thing I liked about your writing was that it is super easy to follow. In the prologue, you've already described how it all ended and through the main chapters it was really easy to understand the story and what your character is trying to convey, I really admire how you described the town, till now where I have read. It was my favourite chapter. Stability of Updates- 5 stars. The author is doing a wonderful job of uploading almost every day. I really really want to take inspiration from you and start doing that with my novels too. It is really an important part of webnovel before it gets popular. Hehe~ if you know what I mean. Story Development- 5 stars. Go read and you'll know what I mean. It is flowing smoothly, and the pacing is nice. It won't let you get bored to a point. Character Design- I gave it a 5. But there's a thing I will surely wanna point out, try describing them too. Like- I don't really know how to make you understand, so here's goes to nothing. Look at this example- Lyla felt her ears twitch and her tail flick, signs of her growing irritation. She hated being ignored, especially by someone who owed her a favour. "Hey, are you even listening?" she clenched her fist as she slammed it on the table. So like that, I mean it describes that she has ears and a tail which makes her a cat girl. That's what I was trying to tell you but yea it's your story and you have the right. Finally, World Background- Here's the thing, I understand that you described in prologue how the world is, you described the town they live in, that's cool. However, world background is not till there, you need to describe the surroundings your character is in while they are doing something. It's just I felt there was a lack of it. That's why I pointed it out. Overall this story is well-deserved, 4.4/- It was enjoyable and I think I will keep reading. Keep doing what you are doing cuz you are awesome at it.
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While I think the author has potential, I still think this book needs a lot of work. It is so hard to follow the details of the book eveñ though I'm only a few chapters in. The book just seems like blocks of text at this point. Zero showing at all, and more of telling us what to happen instead of letting the characters live out their roles. Also, the grammar has a few issues here and there. Nothing bad enough to make the book unreadable, but still enough to make reading the book strenuous...
The writing style of the story is refreshingly simple which makes for an easy and engaging read. However, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors that could benefit from some editing to make the overall flow of reading better. Instead of relying on repetitive suffixes (e.g., "sob...sob...sob..."), maybe use descriptive language to help with the storytelling. Love the prologue. It was effective in providing insight into the protagonist's previous world and aiding in a deeper understanding of her journey. Additionally, I have to praise the story development; it adeptly guides the reader through the events that were unfolding. All in all, the story's potential shines through, with a strong foundation in place that invites further refinement and polish.
Great book, I can see it is well written and explanatory. But this kind of story is not my type, but I think others will find it interesting. Well all in all it was worth the read.
cute story so far I'm on the first chapter i don't really know where your trying to go with the story but I'm intrigued so I'll keep reading
The idea of what would happen if mankind was at its blink of existence is by far my favourite type of story. I enjoyed the started and continue reading this till the end.
Few Grammar mistakes, I noticed but it's ok everyone does this mistakes. A bit of info dump on the start but it's ok. Pacing of the novel is good and the novel is just full of potential, but the author needs to expand on it more
The story so far is good but I hope to see the Author contiune and expand upon the story. The characters are great and only a few Grammar errors along the way. So far the story is a solid 4.6/5 and worth a read to anyone once the author is around 60 chapters
is this a sequel or prequel of sorts?anyway, it still has amazing world building and the pacing of the story is top notch
Okay so, I’ve read at least a few chapters of your book and I’ve got to say that I was a bit confused about the first part (the prologue). What exactly was going on in the World? But then, I realized it was just a dream. What I like about this book is that it can be adapted into an anime series, probably with sci-fi elements. The downside is that you’re dumping too much information on the reader terms that they’ll hardly remember. My suggestion is: - Incorporate your info-dumping in a chapter where people are having a conversation about the history of your World. Info dumping kills the mood. I know it’s a hard habit to unlearn, but I prefer seeing their abilities in action rather than having you explain it. Anyhow, I like this story, it’s basically three friends with cute elf ears having a bunch of shenanigans. Not really my type of novel, but as an anime fan I appreciate your use of -sama and -chan. I know you have other books that contain similar lore, and I’d be more than willing to help you on that if you want. Just tag me. Best of luck on your writing journey.
Despite the deep elements of the story.. ... .. . Women at War babyyyyy!!!!!!! But great characters though
Grat writing style (even considering that this is first-person POV, which you also depicted great)! Furthermore, the way you explain and build the world amazes me. The characters are also well designed. So keep it up!
Very amazing and captivating. I wanna keep reading more! The synopsis is dope and first twenty chapters is lovely. I wanna say Kudos to the Author
The story is well-done, very cute as I mostly read tragic novels XD The writing style is simple and understandable, it improves as the chapters goes on. I hope to continue reading this story! Good luck dear, author~
This book is gold, seriously recommend it. The first prologue got me hooked from the start. I can definitely learn more about writing from this novel. Also I'm the 69th review. Woooo
"It's a charming story, and I've just started reading it. Surprisingly, I find myself liking it even though it's not typically the type of story I go for."
The premise is very interesting and it has a good delivery. I'm only on the first few chapters so i can't really say much on the world building, but overall it seems like this is headed in the right direction.
The writer has alot of great ideas, the writing style is easy to read and consistent a great read for those interested in novels like these with it's own fun twists
Overall this book is really good, with a enticing plot. I would like to read till the end.
Great book and an awesome story. The author has great potential for creating big worlds and designing awesome characters. The writing style is great as it is simple to read and understand the flow of the story. Loved the back ground and the setting. Keep it up.