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but to warn you, it actually has a bad start. This first part of the novel will only have foreshadowings and details for the world. But, I can guarantee you that the ending sequence of this volume will be perfect馃憣馃徎
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Long Night
Atonement's Path
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obviously me
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Long Night
Atonement's Path
Fantasy 路 FriedrichFriedrice
bro thanks this is what I needed 馃槶馃檹馃徎
Lady Ana stretched her arms and rose from her seat, fixing her gaze on Bane. "Would you tell me your name, Ragnar's companion?" she inquired.
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let me be just continue the novel and tell me your opinions馃槶馃檹馃徎 (I know it's too early but give me your opinion atleast chapter 12)
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馃槶馃檹馃徎 Dw bro I changed the way he speaks in the other chapters this was just back then when I was just planning out the novel
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trust me bro it won't be confusing 馃槶馃檹馃徎 It'll make sense馃槶馃檹馃徎
ch 11 Chapter_11: Light Conversation
Atonement's Path
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what do you mean? there's no dialogue in this paragraph
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Thanks broski I didn't noticed that馃槶馃檹馃徎
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Thanks bro
Ragnar's gaze fell upon the encroaching entities, their grotesque forms now just two meters away.
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Fantasy 路 FriedrichFriedrice
thanks bro I'll continue to improve
"Quiet! Well, these lanterns are special. They emit a flame infused with light essences and have been blessed by the Fathers. As for the Molten Phantom, you'll find out in due time. I hope that answers your question, Ragnar," Cliffe replied, a smile gracing his face as he looked at Ragnar.
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Thanks for your mentorship bro I did all the things you taught me馃槶馃檹馃徎
"Quiet! Well, these lanterns are special. They emit a flame infused with light essences and have been blessed by the Fathers. As for the Molten Phantom, you'll find out in due time. I hope that answers your question, Ragnar," Cliffe replied, a smile gracing his face as he looked at Ragnar.
Atonement's Path
Fantasy 路 FriedrichFriedrice
The introduction was great as well the chapter
ch 0 3 Chapter 03 : Normal time..
My silent wolf
Teen 路 Scarlet_Wolf96
Great chapter and the dialogues see quite solid too
ch 0 2 Chapter 02 : This feeling..
My silent wolf
Teen 路 Scarlet_Wolf96
Great chapter so far but I recommend you to use Quillbot it's for grammar corrections and it can improve your grammar by a lot 鉂わ笍鉂わ笍
ch 0 1 Chapter 01 : Glazed eyes.
My silent wolf
Teen 路 Scarlet_Wolf96
Great chapter so far
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: My first Fan
Omniscient Reader (Alternate Story)
Anime & Comics 路 Oldest_Dream3807
thank you but I will continue to improve
ch 0 6 Chapter_6: Lady's Orders
Atonement's Path
Fantasy 路 FriedrichFriedrice
thank you actually I haven't read your novel yet but I will now cafe I've been talking to someone
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Long Night
Atonement's Path
Fantasy 路 FriedrichFriedrice
This is totally one of the best first chapters to a novel馃檹馃徎
ch 0 1 Alone
The Cosmic Throne
Fantasy 路 FrozenOverTheMoon