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In the world of cultivation where the strong eat the weak. Our protagonist being born from a common snake linage was doomed to be the weakest of the weakest of the cultivation world until he/she was gifted a gift from who know where a System...
Watch as how our protagonist grow and evolve from the weakest being in the cultivation world to one of the strongest by using the dragon evolution system!
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You Should start using full words instead of slaughtering them with (pls, ppl) and so forth. It will attract more readers if you add 2% more work to it.
I agree with the first review in the sense that the language used should be correct English, rather than abbreviations. However, the story development is quite solid and the character design is well written. The world building could use some work but overall, congratulations if this is your first novel!
Writing quality 2 star Stability update 3 star Story development 4 star Character design 4 star World background 5 star Ignore the writing quality, everything else is great. If this author can get an editor to help him, surely the story will be rated highly. I am not complaining but as a reader and author, I agree that grammar is important to relay the emotion of the story. So I have to be honest with my rating. The author is gradually improving but still need editor to help edit the chapters starting from the very beginning. Author seems like he has no intention of changing the acronyms into full words for example the synopsis remained the same, the author used pls instead of please and ppl instead of people. Please do change this dear author because as someone who is just recovering from dyslexia like me will have hard time to read your novel. We were taught to spell out to understand the meaning of the words so please do spell everything out.
Man your English is A.I.D.S man... Level: Millennial (lazy in school) So don't put stuff that has nothing to do with the story into the chapters. And ffs decide the gender of your character by yourself, without all this spineless voting crap!
it's really weird and I don't quite understand what the author is going for. In certain novals I have read it have women who harm men by castration, and it normally is funny. however this noval uses it to much to the point it is disgusting.
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Cant even say how many disapointing things i saw in this novel but i know for shure the writer was a dickhead god damn (no im not beeing hard on the guy just look what he did to the mc) he even ****ed up his luck and made a nasty piece of **** system than i swear half the people who read this crap will whant to stab the system and the autor in the "little brother and heavenly marbles" gosh what a waste of time
i like male mc with harem and little *** but you put tooooo much *** etc.gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
I didn't read it yet but just from looking at how the author writing many other novel beside this it was either mean he have too many ideas and will drop many of his novel along the way or he have patient and see it to the end, but the chance of the latter was almost nonexistence
Very good, I look forward to the continuation. But I also think that : I think that the interaction of the MC with other Race (Man / creature having the inteliggence) (to do it between clan / organistation, to give him objectives, to make him leave in the adventure, to visit cities, regions constituting a world ...) can give a different dimension to this novel, and also avoid the stereotype of the MC non-human staying in a place without a real world or goal became very quickly boring
Great work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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It’s fucking dead. Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnhjdfhixitxtizizfizfixtizitzirxitxitxotxtixotxotxotxotxtoxotxotxtixtixitxitxitxitxotxotxtoxixigxogxogxoxgoxogcogxotxotxogxogxgoxgoxotxotxotxitxitxtixtixitxitxitxigxgixigxixihx
Pretty good for anybody who enjoys system novels. I know I do. Overall the grammar is pretty flimsy, but otherwise it is a very well-written plot and storyline. It feels like the Systme novel with lin feng in it. W H A T T H E H E L L I S W I T H T H E R E V I E W C O U N T
Chapter 12 kinda reminds me of madoka magica episode 3 read if you dare. Also where are the dragoons. -10 luck for no reason is kinda harsh. Why didnt the system just check the x or Y chromosomes of people before actually choosing a host if thats how it works
Is this novel Droped????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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I really like the story and the premise, but the writing can improve. Not really sure how this "original story" think works, but I can try to help you (With grammar e.t.c) if you want.
WARNING:DROPPED.... DO NOT READ GRAMMAR SUCKED AND WHEN IT GOT INTERESTING, IT GOT DROPPED(read chapter chapter 12 first)... YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!!!