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(Google translate) The MC is unable to say no, his system is completely useless, every time he uses his power the whole world knows it 🙄 and manages to locate him, he couldn't have lasted a week. It is too dependent on the system when it sucks. He doesn't do anything outside of that, he doesn't train, nothing. The idea has potential but is quite poorly developed
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Author has no mention of how the spirits work the mc turns from a pathetic weakling who cant even ask out his school crush to all of a sudden being able to flirt and go and casual dates with grown women being able to « tease » them which i dont even need to mention how cringe the dialogue is please tone it down and keep it in your pants mc and the fact he takes everything so nonchalantly also seven chapters in he has jus been sleepinh trash author and trash story😐
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(google translator) - The MC is a beta, he just doesn't know how to say "no" as in the case of the fantastic quartet investigating him. Another point that I thought was bad was the system, he is very dependent on the system, the Mc and the type that only reacts, he does not act, I mean that the MC is not proactive in many issues, whether socially or in the search for power, always and told by Mc that he seeks power to protect, but the mc does not train in matters of physics, martial arts or in the matter of using his transformation. The author gave him a martial art, but he did not show how he trained to master, you may have the knowledge of something but to work you have to get your muscles and instincts used to something that he did not do. Another point is that the system is quite useless, if the author does not want a rapid increase in power then just give the MC a power and let him train to gain strength. It was not necessary to add a useless system in which it hardly strengthens the MC.
absolutely fantastic just wish for more updates. character design has been amazing so far, the story is very well thought out, writing quality is good as well. So far definitely one of my favorite marvel fanfics currently. just please update more ok
MC got a System and EVERY random oranization in marvel can read his energy signature whenever he uses his power... Everyone know where he fought and everything is under CONSTANT observation by any organisation. with such a background our mc would be dead or caught within a week. this part of his uselss system and power that tells everyone where he is just ruins the story. i cant read a fight when i KNOW everyone else in the world will know something is happening.... some other examples that tick me off: 1. MC meets fantastic four, they suspect him and want to inspect him and interrogate him. our mc is to beta to just say NO. like anyone would say if some random 4 people want power over your life and time.... 2. MC fights some random invaders in a bunker.... he sees the 2 commanders.... he gets in positions to snipe them.... he kills some RANDOM dude on a computer first and then some useless goons instead of the TWO BOSSES.... at least 1 headshot on the biggest threat would have spared us a useless 2 chapter fightscene..... well thats as far as i got... chapter 10.
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I've read till chapter 12 and there are a few problems that bothered me. First, the MC sometimes act impulsively and dumb. Second, usually systems are used to give a feeling of accomplishment to the readers when they see the visible improvement in the host's stats and power. The author didn't show us the MC's improvement... Third, the dialogs are weird and cringey. bye exp
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Good work and very interesting self insert character and system. If we have more chapters with more frequency, it's very good.... .......,.,........, 🐵😁😁😁😁😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 ...
All in all a great work so far. 1. English and grammar are on point not to say perfect but it's probably a 9.5 out of 10. 2. The plot is amazing and the build of each arc was amazing with no rushed plot or awkward transitions 3. The character dialogues are amazing and there is no forced interaction or forced relation to say of, well maybe the first convo betwenn mc and jennifer walters could have gone a bit better lol, 4. For a novel that has a system theme there is little to be left desired as the author makes a great way of letting the reader know of the mc's advancement without unnecessary info dumps and character sheet pop ups. 5. The mc in my opinion is very likeable and realistic to most mc's who are normal in their own world but become sociopaths/psychopaths in their reincarnation or something. 6. The mc isn't a bimbo, i mean he flirts a little here and there but has a good head on his shoulder's and his character is really good. So if you are reading this review than in my humble opinion, this would be one of the top ff in this app i've ever read and that's saying something cuz i've read a good amount of ff's here.
i love this story man. even better you added my fav childhood game to it and made it seamless , keep up the good work and i hope to read many many more chapters from you
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While I don't know if the video game powers are a reference to a certain game I haven't found. I really enjoy the story and power system you have so keep up the good work author.
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I was suggested this by someone who thought that I'd like it. I thought the premise sounded interesting as fitting Legend of Dragoon into the Marvel Universe would be a task. The author has done a good job of blending the two as well as introducing us to the characters in this universe.
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the best thing about this place was to have the kids to do it and then we can get the best and get it to the best ich bin ein absoluter Anfänger mit der Frage nach der ersten that was weird lol
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Ok here's my review about this story Writing quality is awesome and easy to read The main characters for now is good and likeable And story development is good than I expected So yeah overall this novel is worth to read for you, and I hope author wouldn't drop this novel
Till this point is a really good novel! Likeable mc with strong drive to become stronger so he can protect himself and his loved ones! There are no grammatical errors which is a welcomed trait and I can't believe that only a few people decided to leave a comment! Definitely a hidden gem...(question:is mc gonna be able to transform into a dragon? Kinda hope coz dragons are fcking awesome)
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Reveal Spoiler (Google translate) The MC is unable to say no, his system is completely useless, every time he uses his power the whole world knows it 🙄 and manages to locate him, he couldn't have lasted a week. It is too dependent on the system when it sucks. He doesn't do anything outside of that, he doesn't train, nothing. The idea has potential but is quite poorly developed
Yeah thid is good read this my fellow reader[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Do I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dudeDo I really need to say anything else other than, amazing, thanks for the story my dude
Author has no mention of how the spirits work the mc turns from a pathetic weakling who cant even ask out his school crush to all of a sudden being able to flirt and go and casual dates with grown women being able to « tease » them which i dont even need to mention how cringe the dialogue is please tone it down and keep it in your pants mc and the fact he takes everything so nonchalantly also seven chapters in he has jus been sleepinh trash author and trash story😐
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(google translator) - The MC is a beta, he just doesn't know how to say "no" as in the case of the fantastic quartet investigating him. Another point that I thought was bad was the system, he is very dependent on the system, the Mc and the type that only reacts, he does not act, I mean that the MC is not proactive in many issues, whether socially or in the search for power, always and told by Mc that he seeks power to protect, but the mc does not train in matters of physics, martial arts or in the matter of using his transformation. The author gave him a martial art, but he did not show how he trained to master, you may have the knowledge of something but to work you have to get your muscles and instincts used to something that he did not do. Another point is that the system is quite useless, if the author does not want a rapid increase in power then just give the MC a power and let him train to gain strength. It was not necessary to add a useless system in which it hardly strengthens the MC.
absolutely fantastic just wish for more updates. character design has been amazing so far, the story is very well thought out, writing quality is good as well. So far definitely one of my favorite marvel fanfics currently. just please update more ok
MC got a System and EVERY random oranization in marvel can read his energy signature whenever he uses his power... Everyone know where he fought and everything is under CONSTANT observation by any organisation. with such a background our mc would be dead or caught within a week. this part of his uselss system and power that tells everyone where he is just ruins the story. i cant read a fight when i KNOW everyone else in the world will know something is happening.... some other examples that tick me off: 1. MC meets fantastic four, they suspect him and want to inspect him and interrogate him. our mc is to beta to just say NO. like anyone would say if some random 4 people want power over your life and time.... 2. MC fights some random invaders in a bunker.... he sees the 2 commanders.... he gets in positions to snipe them.... he kills some RANDOM dude on a computer first and then some useless goons instead of the TWO BOSSES.... at least 1 headshot on the biggest threat would have spared us a useless 2 chapter fightscene..... well thats as far as i got... chapter 10.
Reveal Spoiler I've read till chapter 12 and there are a few problems that bothered me. First, the MC sometimes act impulsively and dumb. Second, usually systems are used to give a feeling of accomplishment to the readers when they see the visible improvement in the host's stats and power. The author didn't show us the MC's improvement... Third, the dialogs are weird and cringey. bye exp
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Good work and very interesting self insert character and system. If we have more chapters with more frequency, it's very good.... .......,.,........, 🐵😁😁😁😁😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 ...
All in all a great work so far. 1. English and grammar are on point not to say perfect but it's probably a 9.5 out of 10. 2. The plot is amazing and the build of each arc was amazing with no rushed plot or awkward transitions 3. The character dialogues are amazing and there is no forced interaction or forced relation to say of, well maybe the first convo betwenn mc and jennifer walters could have gone a bit better lol, 4. For a novel that has a system theme there is little to be left desired as the author makes a great way of letting the reader know of the mc's advancement without unnecessary info dumps and character sheet pop ups. 5. The mc in my opinion is very likeable and realistic to most mc's who are normal in their own world but become sociopaths/psychopaths in their reincarnation or something. 6. The mc isn't a bimbo, i mean he flirts a little here and there but has a good head on his shoulder's and his character is really good. So if you are reading this review than in my humble opinion, this would be one of the top ff in this app i've ever read and that's saying something cuz i've read a good amount of ff's here.
i love this story man. even better you added my fav childhood game to it and made it seamless , keep up the good work and i hope to read many many more chapters from you
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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While I don't know if the video game powers are a reference to a certain game I haven't found. I really enjoy the story and power system you have so keep up the good work author.
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please seriously update frequently
I was suggested this by someone who thought that I'd like it. I thought the premise sounded interesting as fitting Legend of Dragoon into the Marvel Universe would be a task. The author has done a good job of blending the two as well as introducing us to the characters in this universe.
I am the exp of my sword Webnovel is my body and exp is my blood I have created a thousand useless reviews Unknown to death,nor known to life Have withstood pain to create many reviews Yet those hand will never hold anything So, as I pray UNLIMITED EXP WORKS
the best thing about this place was to have the kids to do it and then we can get the best and get it to the best ich bin ein absoluter Anfänger mit der Frage nach der ersten that was weird lol
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Ok here's my review about this story Writing quality is awesome and easy to read The main characters for now is good and likeable And story development is good than I expected So yeah overall this novel is worth to read for you, and I hope author wouldn't drop this novel
Till this point is a really good novel! Likeable mc with strong drive to become stronger so he can protect himself and his loved ones! There are no grammatical errors which is a welcomed trait and I can't believe that only a few people decided to leave a comment! Definitely a hidden gem...(question:is mc gonna be able to transform into a dragon? Kinda hope coz dragons are fcking awesome)
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