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Figured I would follow tradition here. Going to try to release 1 chap a day, should be released around 5 PM - 6 PM est. School starts in 5 days so that may change. This is my first story so please don't destroy what little self-confidence I had. If the review is bad, tell me what I did wrong instead of just saying "u suk" thanks <3
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Make the rest of the chapters longer. Short chapters get read in .5 seconds and leaves reads feeling like it's just lacking. Add more descriptions. Start with the back story or get farther into the story before giving one.
This is to help out my fellow Author. I honestly think we should never give out a review on the intro chapter. Wait till a chunk of chapters has been released. The concept is good enough, writing and structure do need some work. I would recommend going back through and making some tweaks. This is still readable, enjoyable and you should never let people who dislike it get you down. Remember, we are not paid for this. It's just a hobby so you should never let others get you down. Keep up the good work!