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Great story, love the wholesome moments, mc isn't a *****, mc isn't scared to flex his might --------------‐---------------------------____________________ _______----------------
Good book and it's very fun to read as there are many loop holes and broken MC but if author did have background story of how hard he trained and fought then it would be understandable. I'm glad Author decided to rewrite his book.
Based on pre dropped totally great fix one of the best experience ever loved the characters and the storyline wish it continued but will definitely read the rewrite
Why did you drop? I loved this story, even though it got a bit off track towards the end, it was AMAZING. Easily one of my favorite stories on this website.
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I NEED MORE CHAPTER !!! POST MORE !!! WRITE UNTIL BLEED !!! TRANSFORM SWEAT AND TEARS IN BEAUTIFUL CHAPTERS !!! **.: Please🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 It's not like I'm telling you to leave your social life, I'd say it's more to try to ignore for two or twenty years only !!!😉😉😉
(〃 ω 〃) (/ω＼) (^///^) （*/∇＼*）ｷｬ (*´∀`*)えへへ （˶′◡‵˶） ﾟ.+:｡(〃ω〃)ﾟ.+:｡ ｷｬｧ♪ (〃▽〃)ﾎﾟｯ (//∇//(//∇//(//∇//) ﾃﾚﾃﾚ (/∇＼*)…Reaaaally? ･:*:･(*/////∇/////*)･:*:･ Oh you~☆(*´∀｀)σ)))))*3ﾟ),･´.､ (つω･*)o(〃・ω・〃)o ・:*:・(●´Д｀●)・:*:・ (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ ( ͡°⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ⁄ʖ⁄ ⁄ ͡°) ( ͡☉⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ͜ʖ̫⁄ ⁄ ͡☉) ‧⁺( ᵒ̴̶̷̥́ ◡ ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ )⁺‧ (*ﾉωﾉ)ｷｬｰ (つ∀<●)ﾟ+.ｷｬｧ♪ モジ(((ＵωＵ｀ *)(* ´ＵωＵ)))モジ ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ(ﾟ∀ﾟ*)(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ もじ(´pq｀*)三(*´pq｀)もじ (∩ﾟ∀｀∩)ｷｬ―!!!! ｷｬｯ♪o((〃∇〃o))((o〃∇〃))oｷｬｯ♪
Welcome back (〃 ω 〃) (/ω＼) (^///^) （*/∇＼*）ｷｬ (*´∀`*)えへへ （˶′◡‵˶） ﾟ.+:｡(〃ω〃)ﾟ.+:｡ ｷｬｧ♪ (〃▽〃)ﾎﾟｯ (//∇//(//∇//(//∇//) ﾃﾚﾃﾚ (/∇＼*)…Reaaaally? ･:*:･(*/////∇/////*)･:*:･ Oh you~☆(*´∀｀)σ)))))*3ﾟ),･´.､ (つω･*)o(〃・ω・〃)o ・:*:・(●´Д｀●)・:*:・ (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ ( ͡°⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ⁄ʖ⁄ ⁄ ͡°) ( ͡☉⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ͜ʖ̫⁄ ⁄ ͡☉) ‧⁺( ᵒ̴̶̷̥́ ◡ ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ )⁺‧ (*ﾉωﾉ)ｷｬｰ (つ∀<●)ﾟ+.ｷｬｧ♪ モジ(((ＵωＵ｀ *)(* ´ＵωＵ)))モジ ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ(ﾟ∀ﾟ*)(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ もじ(´pq｀*)三(*´pq｀)もじ (∩ﾟ∀｀∩)ｷｬ―!!!! ｷｬｯ♪o((〃∇〃o))((o〃∇〃))oｷｬｯ♪
Love the story and you're original characters. The only thing that was not to my liking was the handling of the family aspect. BUT it is good to see you getting back on track with it.
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This is a completely cliche story about an OP guy from what I could gather with a daughter and I put that lightly plot holes even in the early chapters but it isn't horrible just average
Ver very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
una historia fresca desde un punto de vista diferente del habitual de un transmigrado que pelea con todos. y me encanta que tengan momentos tiernos y divertidos,en cuanto las ecenas de pelea no te preocupes como tu historia no se centra el las peleas no afectaria demasiado la historia. y para completar en verdad me encanta tu historia.
A solid read, really enjoy the interactions between everyone and the two daughters and how the Dad basically doesn't give a hoot about anything so long as it doesn't affect his family life. Very enjoyable and very fluffy, the only downside is the sporadic updates.
Here is my review of this novel called "Harem in Marvel Universe". Given the title "Marvel's Strongest Father" you would think the plot would revolve around him and his daughter. Right? No! A pitiful amount of words are set aside for the interactions between father and daughter. Most of the time the chapters are about the MC's doing what he wants claiming it to be "for my family". MC already has 3 women in 50 chapters and counting! Author will probably put almost every woman in Marvel universe as a harem member. Plot: Spends too much time interfering with marvel movie plots. Author will probably loose things to write about quite quickly if this continues. MC: Almost zero backstory for our MC. Very little is know about the main character as well as his daughter prior to meeting god. It's as if it doesn't matter why he adopted his daughter in the first place.
Really like the progression of the story even if it slow comparing the amount of chapters to the time passed in the story. All the events are entertaining and interesting enough you don't have anything to complain. Feeling a little conflict on the harem route with this sweet and fluffy family, but I guess it works well enough. A nice slice of life story with superheroes and action thrown into the fluffiness. Just tiny bit bothered by sometimes missing periods and long stretched out sentences, but its almost negligible.
The concept is pretty good, but the writing and presentation is really bad. Constant grammar and spelling errors, missing words and letters, poor formatting, constant tense and perspective changes and really awkward story pacing. Basically, you had an idea and just started writing without actually learning how to. If you put some effort into actually learning how to write and present a story, I'm sure your idea could have made for quite a decent read, but this thing you've posted here is just an unreadable mess.
Love the story, the plot, the characters and the cuteness. I give everything 5 stars except for updating. I hope the author will update more frequently.
I think you should talk but about him taking holidays on asgardi or some other planet. why almost all marlvel fanfic is all over the earth or asgardi but nothing in the universe
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Una serie muy buena y entretenida para pasar el rato :-[:-D;-):'( Tiene una muy pero muy buena trama ye gusta el desarrollo de los personajes solo quitaría algunas cosas que son demasiado cliché
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Sooo Goooooood story😍😍😍 Ilove the story because its not like other story that focus on mainprotagonist that the story become boring until the end. But your story is different it focus on family and most of all their KAWAAI😚😍 Daughter. thanks for the updates and hardwork😳 I LIKE THE STORY SO FAR☺☺
A very good novel to read. The story is good. The characters are great. The plot is good. The only problem is that the update is slow.... Very slow.
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Great story, love the wholesome moments, mc isn't a *****, mc isn't scared to flex his might --------------‐---------------------------____________________ _______----------------
Good book and it's very fun to read as there are many loop holes and broken MC but if author did have background story of how hard he trained and fought then it would be understandable. I'm glad Author decided to rewrite his book.
Based on pre dropped totally great fix one of the best experience ever loved the characters and the storyline wish it continued but will definitely read the rewrite
Why did you drop? I loved this story, even though it got a bit off track towards the end, it was AMAZING. Easily one of my favorite stories on this website.
Reveal Spoiler 😙☺☺☺☺☺🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😂😂😂😊😊😊😊😉😉😉😊😊😊😋☺😋😂😂😂😁😁😀😀😉😚😚☺☺🙂😋😋😊😊😁😋😎😍😘😘🤔🤔
I NEED MORE CHAPTER !!! POST MORE !!! WRITE UNTIL BLEED !!! TRANSFORM SWEAT AND TEARS IN BEAUTIFUL CHAPTERS !!! **.: Please🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 It's not like I'm telling you to leave your social life, I'd say it's more to try to ignore for two or twenty years only !!!😉😉😉
(〃 ω 〃) (/ω＼) (^///^) （*/∇＼*）ｷｬ (*´∀`*)えへへ （˶′◡‵˶） ﾟ.+:｡(〃ω〃)ﾟ.+:｡ ｷｬｧ♪ (〃▽〃)ﾎﾟｯ (//∇//(//∇//(//∇//) ﾃﾚﾃﾚ (/∇＼*)…Reaaaally? ･:*:･(*/////∇/////*)･:*:･ Oh you~☆(*´∀｀)σ)))))*3ﾟ),･´.､ (つω･*)o(〃・ω・〃)o ・:*:・(●´Д｀●)・:*:・ (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ ( ͡°⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ⁄ʖ⁄ ⁄ ͡°) ( ͡☉⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ͜ʖ̫⁄ ⁄ ͡☉) ‧⁺( ᵒ̴̶̷̥́ ◡ ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ )⁺‧ (*ﾉωﾉ)ｷｬｰ (つ∀<●)ﾟ+.ｷｬｧ♪ モジ(((ＵωＵ｀ *)(* ´ＵωＵ)))モジ ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ(ﾟ∀ﾟ*)(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ もじ(´pq｀*)三(*´pq｀)もじ (∩ﾟ∀｀∩)ｷｬ―!!!! ｷｬｯ♪o((〃∇〃o))((o〃∇〃))oｷｬｯ♪
Welcome back (〃 ω 〃) (/ω＼) (^///^) （*/∇＼*）ｷｬ (*´∀`*)えへへ （˶′◡‵˶） ﾟ.+:｡(〃ω〃)ﾟ.+:｡ ｷｬｧ♪ (〃▽〃)ﾎﾟｯ (//∇//(//∇//(//∇//) ﾃﾚﾃﾚ (/∇＼*)…Reaaaally? ･:*:･(*/////∇/////*)･:*:･ Oh you~☆(*´∀｀)σ)))))*3ﾟ),･´.､ (つω･*)o(〃・ω・〃)o ・:*:・(●´Д｀●)・:*:・ (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ ( ͡°⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ⁄ʖ⁄ ⁄ ͡°) ( ͡☉⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ͜ʖ̫⁄ ⁄ ͡☉) ‧⁺( ᵒ̴̶̷̥́ ◡ ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ )⁺‧ (*ﾉωﾉ)ｷｬｰ (つ∀<●)ﾟ+.ｷｬｧ♪ モジ(((ＵωＵ｀ *)(* ´ＵωＵ)))モジ ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ(ﾟ∀ﾟ*)(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ もじ(´pq｀*)三(*´pq｀)もじ (∩ﾟ∀｀∩)ｷｬ―!!!! ｷｬｯ♪o((〃∇〃o))((o〃∇〃))oｷｬｯ♪
Love the story and you're original characters. The only thing that was not to my liking was the handling of the family aspect. BUT it is good to see you getting back on track with it.
good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job, good job,
Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad. Not bad.
This is a completely cliche story about an OP guy from what I could gather with a daughter and I put that lightly plot holes even in the early chapters but it isn't horrible just average
Ver very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
una historia fresca desde un punto de vista diferente del habitual de un transmigrado que pelea con todos. y me encanta que tengan momentos tiernos y divertidos,en cuanto las ecenas de pelea no te preocupes como tu historia no se centra el las peleas no afectaria demasiado la historia. y para completar en verdad me encanta tu historia.
A solid read, really enjoy the interactions between everyone and the two daughters and how the Dad basically doesn't give a hoot about anything so long as it doesn't affect his family life. Very enjoyable and very fluffy, the only downside is the sporadic updates.
Here is my review of this novel called "Harem in Marvel Universe". Given the title "Marvel's Strongest Father" you would think the plot would revolve around him and his daughter. Right? No! A pitiful amount of words are set aside for the interactions between father and daughter. Most of the time the chapters are about the MC's doing what he wants claiming it to be "for my family". MC already has 3 women in 50 chapters and counting! Author will probably put almost every woman in Marvel universe as a harem member. Plot: Spends too much time interfering with marvel movie plots. Author will probably loose things to write about quite quickly if this continues. MC: Almost zero backstory for our MC. Very little is know about the main character as well as his daughter prior to meeting god. It's as if it doesn't matter why he adopted his daughter in the first place.
Really like the progression of the story even if it slow comparing the amount of chapters to the time passed in the story. All the events are entertaining and interesting enough you don't have anything to complain. Feeling a little conflict on the harem route with this sweet and fluffy family, but I guess it works well enough. A nice slice of life story with superheroes and action thrown into the fluffiness. Just tiny bit bothered by sometimes missing periods and long stretched out sentences, but its almost negligible.
The concept is pretty good, but the writing and presentation is really bad. Constant grammar and spelling errors, missing words and letters, poor formatting, constant tense and perspective changes and really awkward story pacing. Basically, you had an idea and just started writing without actually learning how to. If you put some effort into actually learning how to write and present a story, I'm sure your idea could have made for quite a decent read, but this thing you've posted here is just an unreadable mess.
Love the story, the plot, the characters and the cuteness. I give everything 5 stars except for updating. I hope the author will update more frequently.
I think you should talk but about him taking holidays on asgardi or some other planet. why almost all marlvel fanfic is all over the earth or asgardi but nothing in the universe
super super super super super super super super super super super supersuper super super super super super super super super super super super super super super supersuper super super super super super super super super super super super super super super supersuper super super super super super super super super super super super super super super supersuper super super super super super super super super super super super super super super supersuper super super super
Una serie muy buena y entretenida para pasar el rato :-[:-D;-):'( Tiene una muy pero muy buena trama ye gusta el desarrollo de los personajes solo quitaría algunas cosas que son demasiado cliché
Aaa@aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhbhbbhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Sooo Goooooood story😍😍😍 Ilove the story because its not like other story that focus on mainprotagonist that the story become boring until the end. But your story is different it focus on family and most of all their KAWAAI😚😍 Daughter. thanks for the updates and hardwork😳 I LIKE THE STORY SO FAR☺☺
A very good novel to read. The story is good. The characters are great. The plot is good. The only problem is that the update is slow.... Very slow.
the best book ...................................... fgdhdhdhdhdhdhdhchdjfjdhfhfhfhfdhdhdjdjdjdjdjdjdbseusu2kdueheeheheuejeuehdgeudgeudheuduejeu