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One moment, I'm just lying in a hospital bed on good old Earth, dealing with the usual illness. The next thing I know, I'm not Blake anymore – I'm Prince Nathan Von Vladyr, smack in a world called Everdawn. No more algebra classes, just a world bursting at the seams with magic and creatures of all shapes and sizes.
But here's the real kicker – I've got this insane power, a mashup of mana and Aura that gives me not one, but two cores that I trained. Now, let me tell you, that's a pretty rare deal. Most folks here can't even handle one core, and I'm rocking two like it's no big deal.
So, what's a guy with double cores going to do? Simple – turn Vladyr into the most kick-butt kingdom Everdawn has ever seen and become a one and only existence.
And as if that's not enough, we've got some real threats on the horizon – Barbarians up north, rival kingdoms all around, and those pesky pirates down south and the far east people.
In a world that runs on magic, courage, and a dash of the unexpected, it's me, Blake, or should I say Prince Nathan Von Vladyr, on a quest to shape my kingdom's destiny. Get ready, folks – this adventure is just getting started!
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Just started reading this book. I like the writing style of the author and the story is also good. It's just that some names in the story are a bit complicated to pronounce.
I love the narrative style. It's not overly descriptive and sets up the emotions in scenes really well. There are no noticeable grammar errors which makes it easy to immerse yourself into reading the story. The plot is really interesting too.
better quality of writing than most novels i read, amazing storyline and background, characters are engaging and interesting. I am giving all 5 star, and highly support you!
Let's start from the beginning. The story in the first thirty chapters has a grievous case of "tell, not show" from the get-go, the worst offender of this case being chapters 14, 15, and the ones with the MC's journey through the forest. They are not small per se, but they hardly aggregate something, they are all there to tell something but they don't show. MC struggled, but to what? How and why? Where are the scenes, the showing, the proof of his struggles rather than being said by the narrator? It feels cheap and doesn't give the feelings it was meant to convey. Another problem with the start of the story is how everything is simply handed to the MC without price or drawback. Does he want to start a business? His father gives him the money and means without even thinking of refusing because his son is blessed and a genius. The magical soil too, made his brown sugar business work as intended even with the winter knocking on the door. The magical arrows, the whole stuff with Thornwood's army. It feels cheap, the MC succeeding so many times without "struggle" or challenges. They are said to be there, but they do not seem to, they are told to be there, but we can't feel or grasp them, it feels like void, empty challenges rather than something we should keep track of and be worried about. For a good chunk of the first thirty chapters, the MC feels like a cardboard, his emotions are conveyed to us, but as I said above, it feels cheap because of the narrator, we don't get to be in the MC's skin, to see these details first hand, it feels like we are being handed a summary of his adventures, just a resume of everything that is happening. This is made worse by the outbursts he has in one of the earliest chapters, about the slaves' things. I already addressed it in my comment, but I will do so here again: he went to buy slaves, something that is dark and dirty by nature, and he gets mad at knowing their sob stories. That it is not all rainbows and sunshine? Prisoners of war, debt slaves... and then having a public outburst that is out of place for someone trained in royalty affairs. It is very out of place and out of character. This is worsened by the fact the story, later on, tries to paint the MC as someone human and thoughtful when he is just doing the bare minimum for his slaves (Note: Not all slave-centric societies treated slaves the same, some treated them VERY, VERY BAD, inhumanly to the extremes logical limits, while others treated them like the MC), and the issue with burying the corpses of enemy soldiers, when it was common, and accepted to burn them, bury in public graves, or just let them there because of diseases and plagues that could spread, despite the manpower needed for those burials. Credit where credit is due, you have a good flow with words and an extensive vocabulary that enhances your storytelling and the feelings of the story, even if most of it is taken aback by the heavy "tell not show" approach you took with the start of this one. You are good at this and have a good swing with words and synonyms, this gives a unique feeling to your writing. Now, after chapter 30 the story does get better and more serious, as you address the previous issues, adding more "show not tell" to the narrative, and making Nathan feel like a character instead of a caricature of a storyteller, his emotions are more clear and there are challenges, drawbacks, and consequences to his actions and very existence. However, the cartoonishly evil nobles and church are a hindrance, while they are a common trope, and overused, it would be good to get a new feeling about them rather than what we got about them almost always in medieval fantasy stories, but well, this won't be this type of story. Thornwood is far too cartoonishly evil for my tastes, but he does his job well in the story and is the catalyst for the bad events in MC's life, which is good and gives a sense of struggle and empathy towards the MC, since he struggles for real this time around. However the problems do not end here, it is far to convey and believe MC is a 4-6-8 years old when he goes around fighting, training, doing politics, and whatnot, in those tender ages. He was in a battlefield when he was a mere 6-year-old, for God's sake, you need a very high suspicion of belief to get this right because it is something almost impossible to believe in. There were child generals, politics, and royalty, but they always had someone backing them, guiding them for good, bad, evil, or worse, there was someone there giving the actual shots, they weren't leading those people head-on and on their own. With all of those aspects addressed, despite the rocky start, this story has a future, and I may come back to give an updated review when it accumulates more chapters for me to binge-read in one sitting.
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Within these pages, the author conducts a literary orchestra, harmonizing plot, character, and emotion into a breathtaking crescendo. The story's ebb and flow mirror life's complexities, as characters evolve through challenges and triumphs. Themes of resilience and identity are interwoven with a lyrical elegance that's simply enchanting. Each chapter unfurls like a new layer of a cherished painting, leaving readers immersed in a world both familiar and extraordinary. This book is a testament to the profound artistry of storytelling, leaving an indelible imprint on the heart and mind.
Great story,great world interesting plot the characters are good but sometimes the grammars fell kinda hard to follow even with that it was well written impressive work my friend keep up the good work
The type of magic introduced distinguishes it from other works in the same genre and its very descriptive. Author you're on to a winner with this one
The book has a decent world background which is sensible since the first chapter. The plot is pretty interesting and so are the characters. Even the power system is pretty well built. I liked the relationship described between the family members and their love for each other as well as the side characters, each perfectly crafted. The author has a way with words, writing smoothly and perfectly enjoyable. The only thing, that might both be a flaw and a strength of the novel, is the lengthy descriptions of every small and big detail, which makes it easy to imagine the scene yet boring to read. Overall, this is a good read amd also recommended.
Great story, Great plot and interesting character, I will be reading all the chapters and continue waiting for the new chapter to be released, keep on writing, you’re amazing, 👍
This has to be one of the most descriptive novels I've read, you can literally visualise perfectly by the way he explains them. keep up the good work👍✨
A good pacing and well-developed story! The plot is interesting and the descriptions are very vivid and detailed. It's a satisfying work and I feel really enjoy to read. Keep up your good work!
Very good and interesting novel. Just a suggestion kind of use simple words since some may feel confused. Also, I love the descriptions, world building and characters. This three are the strength/pillars of the novel
I like the story line and characters development design. The details are great. I’m enjoyed reading this book. Will be waiting for the next chapter to be released. Thank you author for your excellent work. Will be recommending this book to everyone 👍😊
From the synopsis alone, you can think this story will surely serve you a wonderful adventure and interesting plot plus the narration is vivid and writing is great. Good jobe author, keep it up!👏👏
Great job! I'm enjoying your story. Just a suggestion, consider using simpler words that everyone can understand. It helps readers flow through the story without needing to look up unfamiliar words. Anyway, Keep writing and do your best
The Core based magic introduced in the story is what makes this book different from many other books with Isekai tropes. All that's left is more development of the story that would show more uniqueness to the usual storyline of this kind of tropes. There are still a few chapters so I hope that this book can show its difference to others and to get more attention from the readers. Keep working on the book, Author.
I like the story-line. The characters are well written too. Personally, i think that there are too much details given in certain parts of the first few chapters and this kindof slows the story progress... not that it's a bad thing though because each writer has their own unique style. There is so much promise in the story and can't wait to see how it turns out.
I am writing the review on my own novel, so anyone who wants to read it can get a little image in their mind about my novel.My story main character is male lead, who was previously a high school boy but he got reincarnated here in this world known as Everdawn. well I don't want give spoilers in it because I know how frustrating it is if you're reading something good and someone you know gives spoiler and ruin your fun. So please read it for understanding more and being a part of mine and my character journey and if you like it then add it to your library and support me by giving power stones.And i can assure that I will release at least 5-6 chapters a week and more if I have free time.