/ Urban / Duelist
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He spent his whole life trying to create the perfect game. After 13 long years, he finally accomplished his goal. A few months after the game launched, he died. The biggest regret he had was not being able to play his own creation himself.
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voce nao vai continuar essa historia nao ? gostaria muito ela parece muito boa e a classe diferente duelista maioria e tudo espadashim magico ou lanceiros ate vi um de arqueiro mais n tem muita pve
Since there is a lack of chapters on which I can comment I have to make due with the present ones. First off, the writing quality is very good. No “obvious“ mistakes and the like. A clear structure with a broad range of descriptions. Easy to read and understand. The introduction is short and precise. No useless babbling about the MC's previous life. The update stability is unclear but we'll see. For now I'll give it 5 stars, since anything else would hinder its path. The story is quite fast paced for the first few chapters but luckily it doesn't seem rushed. Clear and well sorted, the story builds up a sense of intrigue towards the MC. Hand in hand with the story, the character design is, despite being at the start, satisfying. Traits and actions are well presented are catch the characters mood. Later on we will see the extent of the characters potential but the current impression is mostly good. The author avoids long descriptions and babbling, which helps the reading “flow“ and will hopefully stabilies the story. Without all that babbling the story will feel much more “genuine“. The last point. The world background is of course hard to judge since only 6 chapters have been released. We get to know quite a few things in those 6 chapters and I like the fact that they aren't presented in one moment. Often we have some old man the MC meets and suddenly we know everything we need to. The MC knows a lot of things by himself but has to sort them and cannot fully rely on them since they could be wrong or only partially true. He gets some information through some conversation etc. and not a huge amount. I am very interested in where this is going to end up. You have certainly captured my attention. 👏👏👏