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"A guy reincarnated in the body of Riser Phenex with a system.
This work is a piece of fiction, a fanfic created based on the original universe developed by its creators. I want to make it clear that I have immense respect for the work and vision of the original creators. The intention of this fanfic is to explore imaginative possibilities within this universe, without any intention of devaluing or replacing the original work."
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The story feels like a diary of events rather than actual story with how fast paced it feels, there is close to none when it comes to actual meaningful dialogue concerning the MC it just feels so rush, he departed with his first peerage but no one questioned it, we didn't see anyones thoughts on the matter. And the reason for me dropping is the dialogue specifically, it feels quite robotic in a sense.
I love this so far and Just hope that you donot go akikan style or drop it.I am suggesting (it's more of asking) like you got Ezra right? Just hear me out as I am not saying to do this but just voicing out. The peerage (new Members ) Ais from Danmachi Ruby Rose (Rwby) Like I don't think anyone used them so far this way . Bring someone from other verse like Mashu (Fgo) or even Saint Martha hehe he the looks on Heaven faction will be priceless . Tatsumaki is a good choice Then Lastly like Bring someone from Marvel or DC or even some like Tohru from that Anime called dragon Maid or something I forgot anime name
I'll do the story analysis for now, we're entering the second arc now.... the story itself is well written, but a little rushed! the story is a bit reminiscent of the author *akikan40* and it's the story Riser Phenex isn't a villain.... I believe it was inspired by this story, but if it continues like this it could end up becoming another alternative form of the story * akikan40*
It's a good fanfiction so far, I can't wait to see how the plot will continue.
author ahould rreally stop showing that full status, just show it if theres any changes. Are the status just there for the word count?
There are flaws but I like this.Sometimes it does feel rushed but it's just beginning so I hope you improve as you write more.I suggest something from cultivation Novels too can make interesting like that Phenix bloodline from ATG is a good one to have.I don't know how it works though as I am not a fan of those "I ,your father" type novels.Also show some conversation with his family and peerage members and not make people think it's a diary.We have to speculate some so show his wholesome moments with family too.This way even if you are villain we can see his motives as sometimes Villains are more complex than hero and make him more scheming like Aizen.No need to just brute force on his enemies.He can Humiliate Issei more like he can also talk to Gremory family or phoenix family about Issei behavior or do something more drastic but orchestrate it like why a Grafiya only interferes only when Riser is about to do something but Issei can shout whenever he wants ..I mean there are some places you just skipped over
Read it for yourself and find out its pretty interesting so far hope author Rodney make him too ok too quickly ...............................
its a good fic. a little anoying with the format text ( the way they speak etc) therers just a little problem. Sona character its a little off ( a lot ) Summon characters are brainwashed ( Just puppets ) yubellana ( Puppet ) i read till the exorcists , Xenovia and irina ( Puppet) the major problem its theres no emotion , its boring
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A good FanFiction, it seems that lately in the Webnovel among the DxD stories, it has only been reincarnated as Rizer Phenex and this is one of the best!
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First of all, this is DxD... So this is hsrem and this is okay. Writting is okay but seems like a IA talking and acting for other characters. Risee is a bit weak... He has strong powers and it's just a bit strong then orjginal. Next, he has a free hate against him from part of Issei's plot armor, because Sirzechs, Azazel and others don't like or trust him without any good reason. It's a good fanfiction, but for me it's becoming boring. Good luck for you in your path.
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Very good, keep up the good work.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
dude, your story is good, but the text looks like generated AI, I advise you to revive it and diversify it, and try to avoid monotony and tautology
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quite an interesting story with its pros and cons. but since the story hooked me and was very easy to read, I can recommend it to those who like dxd because of its world since it’s a shaving bag) (
great to see a good story about riser Phenex.awesome cover art too