Webnovel Author: Arc_Dragon - Fanfic Collection

Do you clearly see what hapoens when you just jump before not knowing ? If you understood what I said in first should these stupid argument gone furthur? Look to ypur first reply I asked about the exact same thing of why would you refer to her like that which I assumed was you having mis spleed pronouns because she is knows as she by Church people. How my asking of that gone to me liking Gabriel I have no idea . Clearly read comments in it My problem was simple You are making the characters OC and indeed fanfic doesnot need to follow canon but changing some aspects makes DXD fic pointless let me give you an example there are many fics of making the story characters oc but the core stays within their oc ness . Even you act as Asia it will seen through in first glance.Lets not even talk about that but You can clearly see yourself if you are follower All your characters have turned oc and nothing except their names and places mentioned will make people think this is DXD fic .

Oh My God your brain is dull right ? Its not about you making her dude .Its about why are ypu writing her as Lord when clearly she is already depicted female .I was talking about you addressing someone as Lord who is clearly as she.Do you understand what I said ? I said why are you writing lord for Gabriel and even asked you that are going to call Asia lord as well. Read the lines .Does this mean I said you made Somone male nooo dude I mean clearly Someone should read amd see what really I talked about and where you are taking this . I mean really .Pointing out your mistakes in the story is a mistake. You didnot even understand what I said just going making assumptions man this is so funny .

Really? Is this far your mind goes ? Its not about me liking Gabriel I just said that you excuse was ridiculous about it saying that you based that from Bible and all you got is I like gabriel ..I can clearly see where your thinking level is .Read the comment properly .Its not even about Gabriel .If you read it and try to ubderstand it properly then perhaps you can understand something. .

And how exactly is she staying with them and acting is being cautios? If she has Her system .Should she not first think of how to hide instead of showing innocent eyes to fallen angels and Griselda.And fine lets stay with your story but Why is she overthinking and doing nothing You know what I give up .As writing synipsis is the excuse that the story can be great or shitty because you wrote in synopsis so people should leave you alone .Rather than doing better or trying to understand why people are not buying your story even though its mot possible to please everyone but noo "I already said in synopsis that this is just for fun and I have not watch anime in 2 years so eveb if its shitty It is great and anyone not liking should leave " If you have problem with criticism then wrote in your diary .Don't post of website where people will see and review

The reply clearly shows that I don't beed to talk anymore though I want to ask this reply you made so to let others also understand you make Gabriel dude because he is dude in bible ? So In DXd Gabriel is Girl you donot know? And you are asking that where people make Gabriel girl from ? .Kid DXD is an anime who the fuck writes it by basing it from Bible for god's sake ? Do you know how lany wrong things are there if we with Bible? Thats the lamest excuse I ever heard .

It is not about folloeing the original story but you changing every character to og and naming the story DXd only using names of the characters nothing more.You donot need to follow plot but atleast understand the story .Writing for fun excuse is not a good excuse and at this point if MC id just Going to be Asia then the point og OG Mc is also pointless .Your MC is just behaving like Asia.Do you think someone like Gabriel cannot see through acting of some dumb person who overthinks everything and is just a coward .You will probably have excuse for everything so this is just my part of rant .You have not watched the anime in 2 years fine I dont even believe this because the way you write is like you have just read many DXd fanfics and trying your own. Even if this is AU excuse there are many nonsense here . And why is everyone calling Gabriel lord ? Do you not even know to whom Loed is addresses to . Will you write people calling Asia Lord Asia too then ?

I applaud you for deleting reviews.that mentions that you are just copy pasting and taking credits for yourself.This fic is from fanfiction.net and It amazes me how disgusting people can be.Atleast mention that author's name or credit him but No . I also know you will delete thus review because I have seen many one star reviews but you have deleted it. So whatever ..and I will give spoiler without mentioning spiler . ISSEI IS NOT BOOSTED GEAR