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Write a reviewHe came ........................ and a whole world rejoiced ....................ehhhh......small number of chapters if i were to say..........
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Pensamento do dia. Se Deus estΓ‘ em todo lugar, por que as pessoas olham para cima para falar com ele? Se fantasmas podem atravessar paredes, por que nΓ£o caem atravΓ©s do chΓ£o? Continue a escrever autor esperando proximo capitulo ansiosamente π
I liked the book and will continue to follow it it may be good for me and horrible for you after all the author is still learning English and some things don't make sense, so I won't underestimate your efforts.π
Well it's a fanficion... A power hungry authors wet dream lol I wouldnt mind that but this story sucks it doesnt make any sense. I wish the author luck in writing this story.
Author I FUCKING SUGGEST THAT YOU DROP OR REWRITE THIS FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT SCRAP THAT OTHER TRANSMIGRATED PEOPLE AND ALL WILL BE FUCKING GREAT!!!!!!WHY DO SOME PEOPLE LIKE SOMETHING LIKE THAT IT'S PURE BULLSHIT!!!!!THATS ALL AUTHOR AND IM FUCKING OUT!!!!!
Gosto Γ© que nem cΓΊ cada um tem o seu carai... querendo da um de critico vΓ£o comer uma buceta carai nΓ£o bebam Γ‘gua os peixes trasam nela Se vocΓͺ Γ© uma dessas pessoas que nΓ£o tem sorte, quando vir a luz no fim do tΓΊnel...corra, pois Γ© um trem. Se o planeta Γ© redondo, quais sΓ£o os quatro cantos da Terra? π€ Por que o Pato Donald se enrola na toalha de banho se nΓ£o usa calΓ§as?π€ Por que o golpe se chama βBoa noite, Cinderelaβ se quem dorme Γ© a Bela Adormecida?π€
hi, i am the author of this fanfic. well, i wanted to graduate the people who read and like it, and for the people who are coming now, i'm learning english, so sorry if it's bad. well, I ask that before you judge the fic, read at least a few chapters and not just one or two.
This story makes absolutely no sense. The writing style makes it extremely hard to follow, and the main character is a moron. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Foda pra caralho se nΓ£o fosse nao teria dado o trabalho de sair da spiritfanfic e criado uma conta aqui essa Γ© pros BR's que lerem pq nao escrevo em inglΓͺs e nem to afim de ir no tradutor mΓ³ rolΓͺ agora flws ae seus burgueses βπ»
Interesting book became more interesting after the end of chapter 7 in which he demonstrated that the protagonist has a somewhat unexpected goal compared to the other DXD fanfiction Pls MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I liked it very differently from the DXD fanfic that the protagonist becomes a demon and only thinks about making a Harem and killing the protagonist, the MC has a goal of making the humanity that is oppressed by the demons to become strong and thus not to be below the demons as a inferior race.
Reveal Spoilerimmediately lost interest after MC acted like an idiot and confessed to sona...MC is supposed to be coolheaded and acts naturally since he knows the plot and all while issei is supposed to be the perverted one...you just had to go and make MC an idiotic buffoon that is just as perverted as issei
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He came ........................ and a whole world rejoiced ....................ehhhh......small number of chapters if i were to say..........
Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.
I want more chaptersπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Pensamento do dia. Se Deus estΓ‘ em todo lugar, por que as pessoas olham para cima para falar com ele? Se fantasmas podem atravessar paredes, por que nΓ£o caem atravΓ©s do chΓ£o? Continue a escrever autor esperando proximo capitulo ansiosamente π
I liked the book and will continue to follow it it may be good for me and horrible for you after all the author is still learning English and some things don't make sense, so I won't underestimate your efforts.π
Well it's a fanficion... A power hungry authors wet dream lol I wouldnt mind that but this story sucks it doesnt make any sense. I wish the author luck in writing this story.
Author I FUCKING SUGGEST THAT YOU DROP OR REWRITE THIS FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT SCRAP THAT OTHER TRANSMIGRATED PEOPLE AND ALL WILL BE FUCKING GREAT!!!!!!WHY DO SOME PEOPLE LIKE SOMETHING LIKE THAT IT'S PURE BULLSHIT!!!!!THATS ALL AUTHOR AND IM FUCKING OUT!!!!!
Gosto Γ© que nem cΓΊ cada um tem o seu carai... querendo da um de critico vΓ£o comer uma buceta carai nΓ£o bebam Γ‘gua os peixes trasam nela Se vocΓͺ Γ© uma dessas pessoas que nΓ£o tem sorte, quando vir a luz no fim do tΓΊnel...corra, pois Γ© um trem. Se o planeta Γ© redondo, quais sΓ£o os quatro cantos da Terra? π€ Por que o Pato Donald se enrola na toalha de banho se nΓ£o usa calΓ§as?π€ Por que o golpe se chama βBoa noite, Cinderelaβ se quem dorme Γ© a Bela Adormecida?π€
hi, i am the author of this fanfic. well, i wanted to graduate the people who read and like it, and for the people who are coming now, i'm learning english, so sorry if it's bad. well, I ask that before you judge the fic, read at least a few chapters and not just one or two.
This story makes absolutely no sense. The writing style makes it extremely hard to follow, and the main character is a moron. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Foda pra caralho se nΓ£o fosse nao teria dado o trabalho de sair da spiritfanfic e criado uma conta aqui essa Γ© pros BR's que lerem pq nao escrevo em inglΓͺs e nem to afim de ir no tradutor mΓ³ rolΓͺ agora flws ae seus burgueses βπ»
Interesting book became more interesting after the end of chapter 7 in which he demonstrated that the protagonist has a somewhat unexpected goal compared to the other DXD fanfiction Pls MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I liked it very differently from the DXD fanfic that the protagonist becomes a demon and only thinks about making a Harem and killing the protagonist, the MC has a goal of making the humanity that is oppressed by the demons to become strong and thus not to be below the demons as a inferior race.
Reveal Spoilerimmediately lost interest after MC acted like an idiot and confessed to sona...MC is supposed to be coolheaded and acts naturally since he knows the plot and all while issei is supposed to be the perverted one...you just had to go and make MC an idiotic buffoon that is just as perverted as issei
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