DxD World

LV 13

Yanagi_sense1

immediately lost interest after MC acted like an idiot and confessed to sona...MC is supposed to be coolheaded and acts naturally since he knows the plot and all while issei is supposed to be the perverted one...you just had to go and make MC an idiotic buffoon that is just as perverted as issei

LV 4

Darth_foreskin

I'm disappointed in the character of the main character. He should be much more stealthy and cautious instead of just getting into contact with every supernatural being he meets.

LV 2

SupremGG

hi, i am the author of this fanfic. well, i wanted to graduate the people who read and like it, and for the people who are coming now, i'm learning english, so sorry if it's bad. well, I ask that before you judge the fic, read at least a few chapters and not just one or two.

LV 12

Sevennamed

This story makes absolutely no sense. The writing style makes it extremely hard to follow, and the main character is a moron. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

LV 1

YugoWakfu

Foda pra caralho se não fosse nao teria dado o trabalho de sair da spiritfanfic e criado uma conta aqui essa é pros BR's que lerem pq nao escrevo em inglês e nem to afim de ir no tradutor mó rolê agora flws ae seus burgueses ✌🏻

LV 1

EnkiduSky

Interesting book became more interesting after the end of chapter 7 in which he demonstrated that the protagonist has a somewhat unexpected goal compared to the other DXD fanfiction Pls MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

LV 4

shifuufufuuud

Author I FUCKING SUGGEST THAT YOU DROP OR REWRITE THIS FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT SCRAP THAT OTHER TRANSMIGRATED PEOPLE AND ALL WILL BE FUCKING GREAT!!!!!!WHY DO SOME PEOPLE LIKE SOMETHING LIKE THAT IT'S PURE BULLSHIT!!!!!THATS ALL AUTHOR AND IM FUCKING OUT!!!!!

LV 3

Jack_Gilgamesh

I liked the book and will continue to follow it it may be good for me and horrible for you after all the author is still learning English and some things don't make sense, so I won't underestimate your efforts.😁

LV 1

YugoWakfu

Gosto é que nem cú cada um tem o seu carai... querendo da um de critico vão comer uma buceta carai não bebam água os peixes trasam nela Se você é uma dessas pessoas que não tem sorte, quando vir a luz no fim do túnel...corra, pois é um trem. Se o planeta é redondo, quais são os quatro cantos da Terra? 🤔 Por que o Pato Donald se enrola na toalha de banho se não usa calças?🤔 Por que o golpe se chama “Boa noite, Cinderela” se quem dorme é a Bela Adormecida?🤔

LV 3

HaremPLS

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LV 13

ATrueWaifu

He came ........................ and a whole world rejoiced ....................ehhhh......small number of chapters if i were to say..........

LV 13

HaremLoverKoneko

Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.Pathetic MC.

LV 3

Jack_Gilgamesh

I want more chapters👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

LV 1

YugoWakfu

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LV 1

EnkiduSky

Pensamento do dia. Se Deus está em todo lugar, por que as pessoas olham para cima para falar com ele? Se fantasmas podem atravessar paredes, por que não caem através do chão? Continue a escrever autor esperando proximo capitulo ansiosamente 👌

LV 5

uSeer

Well it's a fanficion... A power hungry authors wet dream lol I wouldnt mind that but this story sucks it doesnt make any sense. I wish the author luck in writing this story.