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Synopsis
Julio Acosta, a run of the mill guy, had what is probably the worst day in his life. Fired from his job in spite of being employee of the month for three years in a row, kicked out of his apartment by his ex and, to boot, stabbed by some random hobo as he tried to get something to drink at a 7-Eleven.
Being an orphan and having to work thrice as hard to get something others had by "right" had been hard, but that day in particular topped everything else in his life.
Luckily for him, fate had a different plan than simple death for him. A plan that would enchant the most common of men...
But we all know there is no such thing as a free lunch.
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Reveal SpoilerThe only thing I can actually complain about are the first 4 chapters which feel a bit rushed, but it actually picks up by the 5th one. It would seem like the author wanted to avoid spending much time on the first few chapters. Besides that, it is entertaining and doesn't feel too forced or cringe in these 6 chapters. Perhaps a bit cringe, but not the bad kind.
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was great it just felt like you rushed everything. it was moving two fast, and there was a lot of irrelevant things I didn't like but don't really matter
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My review 4 chapter in, Synopsis: The synopisis is what I believe a good synopisis should be or pretty close to, it sums up his backstory in a clear an concise manner and then uses 2 phrases i found really enthralling. “A plan that would enchant the most common of men…” and “But we all know that there is no such thing as a free lunch”. Especially so for the first phrase as it really intertwines with ‘Encato’ 9/10 Concept: Whilst the concept of transmigration and being given powers by a ROB is overused a bit and cliche, the world he is being sent to and the author’s own additions is unique and novel. 6/10 Pacing: The pacing within just 4 chapters is fast but you can’t expect much from a fan-fic of a disney movie. I wouldn’t expect this be a long novel just based on the current pacing in addition to the world he’s transmigrated to. 4/10 Grammar: There is grammatical mistakes Just like every other novel on this site, but I’d say its a step above other novels especially in comparison to fan-fics where the author’s first language isn’t English. Though the style of writing is quite awkard and stiff but not anything significant. 8/10 World building: Can’t speak much from a world building perspective but there was little to none world building and character explanation in the prior world. and as world building is somewhat tied to the pacing of a novel I do have to make my own assumptions but the pros of doing fan-fics is that the world building part of it is basically partially completed anyways. 5/10 Overall: I have expectations for this novel to do well for a fan-fic, and enjoyed the little bit of romance we the readers have been exposed to so far, hopefully the mc doesnt turn into those brain dead brutes who can only think with their lower half. 6.4/10 so far. ~KinglyBeast
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