Its a cluster ****! I know its harsh but its lIterally all conjoined together into a massive paragraph per chapter
Tgere is also no way to determine who is speaking some times
If these issues are fixed id give it another read
Best book ever! I cannot wait for more! This is an edge of your seat kind of novel and I love every chapter I read more and more! I cant wait to see what else you come up wIth!
Its a cluster ****! I know its harsh but its lIterally all conjoined together into a massive paragraph per chapter Tgere is also no way to determine who is speaking some times If these issues are fixed id give it another read