Epitome Series: The Path To Be A SUPER FAMOUS

The beginning of the chapter at first was catchy with its activity, so to speak. But I, as a reader, are not very interested in this hero. He scolds himself. he does not know the simple truth, unless you praise yourself, who will praise you. It is immediately clear that these are problems of puberty. A schoolboy is looking for himself. wants to express themselves and needs support from the parents And of course they are not in place, they are at work, they earn money. Then the complex can be easily formed - futoko. That is, the first chapter on the one hand attracts with its spontaneity, and on the other, the hero is not interesting. There are millions, hundreds of millions around the world. Ordinary schoolchildren with their cockroaches in their heads. In my opinion, I'm not a writer, I'm a techie, but I love prose: - from the first chapter it is necessary to interest the reader in his main character, to show his peculiarity, uniqueness, why should I read this? If he scolds himself, does this mean that it will be more interesting next or will there be a nagging young man? Something reminds the plot of ordinary Japanese schoolchildren who are shot in the genre of everyday life. I wonder what kind of killer regime the protagonist is - Grade 8 syndrome? Something action is developing too unexpectedly, but it seems to be true, all sorts of hell happens unexpectedly. But a man will not be able to give birth to a cat; his “nya” will not pass from the cat. It takes a long time to train. Not naturally, at the expense of transferring the system, unless the first host was just a kamikaze, the system did not help him. sense from such a system? The system is a rich friend and a poor friend is cliché. Have you seen this in the real world? Me not. Since the rich live in their own world and the poor or the middle class in their own. Parents simply will not allow the rich to communicate outside their circle. The rich buy something themselves? It seems that they are bringing everything to them, in principle, they are not interested in buying something. I think that the rich will not go shopping for the middle class, they have their own ranking there. And the middle class will not go shopping for rich people. Different psychology, different world. Yeah, yeah, did you believe that a rich daughter would be sent alone without protection to go and buy something on her own? I do not believe?! And you? It seems that the protagonist is exaggeratedly stupid and not sensitive. Also cliché, not realistic. Wow, is this happening at the mall? Cederic is an idiot? There are many cameras. Does he want his face fixed? And then he and his company had problems? He does not see the class of clothes and is looking for trouble? Well, if it is not rolled up in a barrel of cement, but rich parents can instantly deal with it. Again cliché. In the real world, there are no idiots, despite the harmonies. a sense of security will be higher. Also cliché, a girl stronger than a boy. The pluses of the cliché are that you do not need to describe the character, the world, the cons, that this is not your own but borrowed. If everyone knows that she is rich, that it is unnecessary to anger her ... and then suddenly such vandalism with a bear, something does not fit here ... and she would not play in an ordinary playground. The rich live their own lives and everyone else lives their own. Although, it should be noted even with an abundance of cliches, the novel is read easily, all events are understandable, the world is more or less clear, although with some reservations. Would a young mistress be released into the unknown? I do not believe! This is romance, too sweet, too naive, everything is developing too fast. But this is the author’s idea. He mastered 11 chapters. What can I say, this novel is for romantics, lovers of sentimental stories, the novel is replete with cliches, but it is easy to read, although there are some inconsistencies. But overall a very promising novel. This is not my cup of coffee, but the author did a good job. Good luck to him.