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General_Paragon

This is a rewrite of the previous version. What changed? The first chapter is much better than before, and this time it also has more sense. Because the novel of Against the Gods is quite further past the previous time I read it to make this fanfic, now I am using more precise data to write this. The grammar is muuuuuch greater than before, and I will do my best to not make it cringy. Confirmed crossovers with: 1) Konosuba (The order might be different) ?) Infinite Stratos ?) Seraph of the End ?) Shimoneta ?) Akame ga kill Last) Against the Gods(Original Universe) Possible crossovers with: ?) Monster Girl Quest ?) Blade Dance ?) Chivalry of the Failed Knight ?) Seven Deadly Sins ?) Bleach ?) More... Impossible crossover with: Dragon Ball Naruto (Especially this) One Piece Overlord Boku no pico Asterisk war Possibly more... If you know a verse with a great variety of power levels, you can suggest it. If you wish, you can also recommend something you would like to see in the fanfiction, depending on your decision, I will take it in consideration.

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Viibration

All 5 for kono dio da (ch 74) 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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Pool
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I believe this is one of the best novels. I've read in the whole of web novel yet it's an overall 4 because I believe it was one of the best novels ever

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Rukimedsu

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CharleyHerrera

Well this was a really good story'too bad that is dropped'i was hoping to see de mc in the akagame ga kill world'well im going to see yours another storyes'

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Daoist314597

HEY MAN TY FOR THIS FAN FIC I REALLY LIKE THIS I NEED MORE CHAPTERS KEEP UP THE EPIC WORK CUZ THIS IS GOOD SHT AND IM HAVING A LOT OF FUN AND GOOD VIBES

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X12345

He should have continued this novel but still one of the best novels i read and am thankfull to the author for writing such a great novel hhhhhhhh

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AzureYuhao

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Maurz
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Great if you like OP mc fanfictions especially with cocky mc. Fun read. .....................................................................

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mskomek
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pretty goodno bull**** meaningless op and mc dies yes he dies i recommended in top 5 fanfic pretty goodno bull**** meaningless op and mc dies yes he dies i recommended in top 5 fanfic pretty goodno bull**** meaningless op and mc dies yes he dies i recommended in top 5 fanfic pretty goodno bull**** meaningless op and mc dies yes he dies i recommended in top 5 fanfic

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Tomi
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waT
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To bad that its over............................................................................................ .... .......... .............. ......... ......... ............................

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Alfakir1M

The Immortal world ............. ............ ......... . .. .......... . ............. .............. .. ...... ........ ........ ........ ......... ...........

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Blasphemer

Basically he reincarnates into another world have a family get kids and grand kids die loses memories of them reincarnates again, does the the same thing over and over again.Idk which sick person would enjoy being in his position.

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MilkGod
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It's ok the character design is not good nor bad. Rarely speaks about the background, the author is cool to add him/her self to the novel. Over all it's ok.

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areus
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ZzAaZzOo777

Thanks author for the best novel Keep up the good work 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.........................................................:.:::::::

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unidentify

Taking the main character of ATG and giving him a new name. Piece him in some already known stories and you get that novel. Since am not a writer, can give a thumbs up for the story. Depending on your view of the known stories to suit the MC which is too OP wherever he goes, I didn’t like the fact that he crush those who were suppose to be the MC of the original story to suit him. But that not my novel, am just a reader.

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MilkDurano

the mc speaks too much vulgarities and its really putting me off. the mc's personality is unstable. he's like a brat in his rebellious phase throwing a tantrum. i tried to persevere till chap 90 but i can't go on anymore.

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goldzi

Another droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

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goldzi

Another droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

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Electez

You my good sir or lady are a evil genious and always manege to make me cry your endings are great and so is everything else but if you have thw time to do so plese make him go into the world of Akame ga kill or Berserk or Claymore

5yr
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TastyRice

Well, I've read the first Volum and am midway in the second one. The author didn't really change anything except for the MC of the anime with his and powered him up. The happeneings are all very similar if not the same as in the anime. It looks like this is also happening in the secon Volume but I don't actually know as I'm still reading it. This review is more towards the first volume.

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Robby119

Advice : - more chapter for different anime world so it's not too short for one story - more mainstream anime like HxH, Naruto, one piece, Duolou Dalu, 7Sin, library of heavent path, etc

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Unique_Sovereign

This story is unique in its own way as the protagonist travels through different worlds by the author. It's mix with the popular anime and light novels that give a sense of adventure for the story

5yr
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Little_Ancestor

While reading it seem more like a summary of a story then an actually story. Everything happens rapidly and the MC doesn't have an antagonist or struggle. He is to op too quickly. The girls that like him seem really ***** and stalkerish. He just accept them with expressing deep feeling beforehand. He love his new parents but rarely interact with them. Most read of vague training and op actions. Also another I was clueless about IS for about 5-7 chapters. When people said what it stood for I was still cluess because I never heard of it. Thankfully I came across a commenter who explain. I believe if the first story had more depth and emotion I would keep reading. Anyway I hope the author keeps improving because the ideas are great.

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UnknownBW

Its really funny..hahahHHHhahahHahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahhahahahaha............... .............................peace yow..........

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General_Paragon

This is a rewrite of the previous version. What changed? The first chapter is much better than before, and this time it also has more sense. Because the novel of Against the Gods is quite further past the previous time I read it to make this fanfic, now I am using more precise data to write this. The grammar is muuuuuch greater than before, and I will do my best to not make it cringy. Confirmed crossovers with: 1) Konosuba (The order might be different) ?) Infinite Stratos ?) Seraph of the End ?) Shimoneta ?) Akame ga kill Last) Against the Gods(Original Universe) Possible crossovers with: ?) Monster Girl Quest ?) Blade Dance ?) Chivalry of the Failed Knight ?) Seven Deadly Sins ?) Bleach ?) More... Impossible crossover with: Dragon Ball Naruto (Especially this) One Piece Overlord Boku no pico Asterisk war Possibly more... If you know a verse with a great variety of power levels, you can suggest it. If you wish, you can also recommend something you would like to see in the fanfiction, depending on your decision, I will take it in consideration.

4yr
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Viibration

All 5 for kono dio da (ch 74) 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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Pool
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I believe this is one of the best novels. I've read in the whole of web novel yet it's an overall 4 because I believe it was one of the best novels ever

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Rukimedsu

muy bueno)()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

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CharleyHerrera

Well this was a really good story'too bad that is dropped'i was hoping to see de mc in the akagame ga kill world'well im going to see yours another storyes'

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Daoist314597

HEY MAN TY FOR THIS FAN FIC I REALLY LIKE THIS I NEED MORE CHAPTERS KEEP UP THE EPIC WORK CUZ THIS IS GOOD SHT AND IM HAVING A LOT OF FUN AND GOOD VIBES

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X12345

He should have continued this novel but still one of the best novels i read and am thankfull to the author for writing such a great novel hhhhhhhh

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AzureYuhao

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Maurz
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Great if you like OP mc fanfictions especially with cocky mc. Fun read. .....................................................................

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mskomek
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pretty goodno bull**** meaningless op and mc dies yes he dies i recommended in top 5 fanfic pretty goodno bull**** meaningless op and mc dies yes he dies i recommended in top 5 fanfic pretty goodno bull**** meaningless op and mc dies yes he dies i recommended in top 5 fanfic pretty goodno bull**** meaningless op and mc dies yes he dies i recommended in top 5 fanfic

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Tomi
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......................................................................................................,.,..................................................................

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waT
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To bad that its over............................................................................................ .... .......... .............. ......... ......... ............................

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Alfakir1M

The Immortal world ............. ............ ......... . .. .......... . ............. .............. .. ...... ........ ........ ........ ......... ...........

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Blasphemer

Basically he reincarnates into another world have a family get kids and grand kids die loses memories of them reincarnates again, does the the same thing over and over again.Idk which sick person would enjoy being in his position.

4yr
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MilkGod
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It's ok the character design is not good nor bad. Rarely speaks about the background, the author is cool to add him/her self to the novel. Over all it's ok.

4yr
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areus
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ZzAaZzOo777

Thanks author for the best novel Keep up the good work 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.........................................................:.:::::::

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The_Monster999

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VickyGamer102

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unidentify

Taking the main character of ATG and giving him a new name. Piece him in some already known stories and you get that novel. Since am not a writer, can give a thumbs up for the story. Depending on your view of the known stories to suit the MC which is too OP wherever he goes, I didn’t like the fact that he crush those who were suppose to be the MC of the original story to suit him. But that not my novel, am just a reader.

5yr
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MilkDurano

the mc speaks too much vulgarities and its really putting me off. the mc's personality is unstable. he's like a brat in his rebellious phase throwing a tantrum. i tried to persevere till chap 90 but i can't go on anymore.

5yr
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goldzi

Another droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

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goldzi

Another droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

5yr
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Electez

You my good sir or lady are a evil genious and always manege to make me cry your endings are great and so is everything else but if you have thw time to do so plese make him go into the world of Akame ga kill or Berserk or Claymore

5yr
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TastyRice

Well, I've read the first Volum and am midway in the second one. The author didn't really change anything except for the MC of the anime with his and powered him up. The happeneings are all very similar if not the same as in the anime. It looks like this is also happening in the secon Volume but I don't actually know as I'm still reading it. This review is more towards the first volume.

5yr
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Robby119

Advice : - more chapter for different anime world so it's not too short for one story - more mainstream anime like HxH, Naruto, one piece, Duolou Dalu, 7Sin, library of heavent path, etc

5yr
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Unique_Sovereign

This story is unique in its own way as the protagonist travels through different worlds by the author. It's mix with the popular anime and light novels that give a sense of adventure for the story

5yr
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Little_Ancestor

While reading it seem more like a summary of a story then an actually story. Everything happens rapidly and the MC doesn't have an antagonist or struggle. He is to op too quickly. The girls that like him seem really ***** and stalkerish. He just accept them with expressing deep feeling beforehand. He love his new parents but rarely interact with them. Most read of vague training and op actions. Also another I was clueless about IS for about 5-7 chapters. When people said what it stood for I was still cluess because I never heard of it. Thankfully I came across a commenter who explain. I believe if the first story had more depth and emotion I would keep reading. Anyway I hope the author keeps improving because the ideas are great.

5yr
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UnknownBW

Its really funny..hahahHHHhahahHahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahhahahahaha............... .............................peace yow..........

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