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Write a reviewI'm disappointed that it just ends with no resolution. I bought the book hoping to finish a great story. to the author author: thank you for your time and talent. you've built a wonderful world here please don't stop.
I've read this novel at Web comic before it was so great I couldn't finish it bc of some problems but I'm happy that i found it here😶😌[img=recommend]
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amazing book the best book to like ever exist on webnovel and wattpad it has a very unique yet cliched plot, nice humor, and swoon worthy chemistry between the leads <33
love the book <3<3<3<3<3 the best book ever!!!!! author, please update!!!!!! hooooooerovofvfuhhhhhhhq;hvfeb;urrrrrwidvnurdsnv;owrihdvnx, zhgggzdxvn, m
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Reveal SpoilerSo far, I've only been able to make it to chapter 21, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. At this point in the story, there is little to no direction. The MC self monologues keep insisting that they aren't more coherent than a baby, then the thoughts say otherwise over and over. Grammar, spelling, and word usage are abominable to put it lightly. Using footnotes to only give a description of Chinese Idiom is useless if you don't explain the idiom to those that don't know it. My biggest piece of advice is to get somebody who is a stickler for grammar and spelling to check your stuff before you post it, because if there are locked chapters for this book (only at 21 so far after all), I will not being paying for them at this rate.
Is this novel completely completed? I read the last ch 111 but it looks like there’s more story to go????????? Ch 111 ending is a bit disappointing if it read done😭 Author please give us more with happy ending.
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To write this kind of novel in your 15.. well done!! That’s just what I can say✅ Your style of writing is not bad. Truely a gem. You have a big potential to go far in the future. Your writing got style too. Well done author!!!👍🏻✨💦
Beautiful Story. I love it. I love the charaters, I love the plot, I love the background, and I love how it was written. Good job authors, I really enjoy it LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
Tbh the ending isnt that good bc well we dont know how the war turned out and we dont know about the marriage of tian tian and her ik this is ur first story but u should fill in atleast one of these end but good job for ur first other than the ending it was good and grammer is something everyone has their first tume writing it get better with time
Honestly this book has little consistency, going from magic and mana and stuff to cultivation in like 3 chapters. im only at ch17 but i feel like the author just abandoned the entire original story already. well its still fun to read sooooo....
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This story is really interesting so far. But I’m bit curious on what type of genre is this like for example, Yaoi, Yuri, Straight or no romances...
i haven't read this novel but i just felt like writing a review so yeah how's you day going? i hope it's going well even yes mhm i agree yes yes
could not for the life of me get hooked.its too apparent that writer is still new. plot is quirky in a good way but character development just ddnt hold up
I LOVE IT! THE PLOT IS REFRESHING FOR ME.. Because she likes to be a villainess and so powerful.. ans I am glad that the story starts as she was born.. not in the middle of the story.. I can see the greatness that the MC portrays... SHE IS PRODIGY! I LOVE IT! AND THE MAGIC! SHE HAS MANY MANA AND CHEAT THAT SHE LOOKS LIKE SHE’S UNBEATABLE! I LOVE THE FAMILY! They are so sweet and good..and the fiancee I am looking forward to their romance. I can’t wait to see more of MC’s Queen like revenge! I RECOMMENDED IT! SO GOOD!
this is a good novel but there is just one thing that will maybe bother most of you... and it is the cringy shit that the author makes the characters say
Wow! This is indeed a gem. The narrative is beautifully written and the characters are fantastic. I would recommend this any day. Kudos to the author.
I love this book sooooooooooo much! I can’t wait for more! I love the fl! She’s the right combination of smart, confident, and vulnerable. I also love how it deals with some real problems and harsh realities.
This book is awesome! please update more chapters though I love your novel... I've even added it in my reading list.... And that's why I've given 5/5 rating
I'm disappointed that it just ends with no resolution. I bought the book hoping to finish a great story. to the author author: thank you for your time and talent. you've built a wonderful world here please don't stop.
I've read this novel at Web comic before it was so great I couldn't finish it bc of some problems but I'm happy that i found it here😶😌[img=recommend]
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amazing book the best book to like ever exist on webnovel and wattpad it has a very unique yet cliched plot, nice humor, and swoon worthy chemistry between the leads <33
love the book <3<3<3<3<3 the best book ever!!!!! author, please update!!!!!! hooooooerovofvfuhhhhhhhq;hvfeb;urrrrrwidvnurdsnv;owrihdvnx, zhgggzdxvn, m
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Reveal SpoilerSo far, I've only been able to make it to chapter 21, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. At this point in the story, there is little to no direction. The MC self monologues keep insisting that they aren't more coherent than a baby, then the thoughts say otherwise over and over. Grammar, spelling, and word usage are abominable to put it lightly. Using footnotes to only give a description of Chinese Idiom is useless if you don't explain the idiom to those that don't know it. My biggest piece of advice is to get somebody who is a stickler for grammar and spelling to check your stuff before you post it, because if there are locked chapters for this book (only at 21 so far after all), I will not being paying for them at this rate.
Is this novel completely completed? I read the last ch 111 but it looks like there’s more story to go????????? Ch 111 ending is a bit disappointing if it read done😭 Author please give us more with happy ending.
Wow it's done. This story is unbelievable, I like how the characters are build. I will recommend this to my followers. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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To write this kind of novel in your 15.. well done!! That’s just what I can say✅ Your style of writing is not bad. Truely a gem. You have a big potential to go far in the future. Your writing got style too. Well done author!!!👍🏻✨💦
Beautiful Story. I love it. I love the charaters, I love the plot, I love the background, and I love how it was written. Good job authors, I really enjoy it LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
Tbh the ending isnt that good bc well we dont know how the war turned out and we dont know about the marriage of tian tian and her ik this is ur first story but u should fill in atleast one of these end but good job for ur first other than the ending it was good and grammer is something everyone has their first tume writing it get better with time
Honestly this book has little consistency, going from magic and mana and stuff to cultivation in like 3 chapters. im only at ch17 but i feel like the author just abandoned the entire original story already. well its still fun to read sooooo....
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This story is really interesting so far. But I’m bit curious on what type of genre is this like for example, Yaoi, Yuri, Straight or no romances...
i haven't read this novel but i just felt like writing a review so yeah how's you day going? i hope it's going well even yes mhm i agree yes yes
could not for the life of me get hooked.its too apparent that writer is still new. plot is quirky in a good way but character development just ddnt hold up
I LOVE IT! THE PLOT IS REFRESHING FOR ME.. Because she likes to be a villainess and so powerful.. ans I am glad that the story starts as she was born.. not in the middle of the story.. I can see the greatness that the MC portrays... SHE IS PRODIGY! I LOVE IT! AND THE MAGIC! SHE HAS MANY MANA AND CHEAT THAT SHE LOOKS LIKE SHE’S UNBEATABLE! I LOVE THE FAMILY! They are so sweet and good..and the fiancee I am looking forward to their romance. I can’t wait to see more of MC’s Queen like revenge! I RECOMMENDED IT! SO GOOD!
this is a good novel but there is just one thing that will maybe bother most of you... and it is the cringy shit that the author makes the characters say
Wow! This is indeed a gem. The narrative is beautifully written and the characters are fantastic. I would recommend this any day. Kudos to the author.
I love this book sooooooooooo much! I can’t wait for more! I love the fl! She’s the right combination of smart, confident, and vulnerable. I also love how it deals with some real problems and harsh realities.
This book is awesome! please update more chapters though I love your novel... I've even added it in my reading list.... And that's why I've given 5/5 rating
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