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Nice liked it. Waiting for it to continue. I had liked these things(concept from beginning and its really awesome.+feels like this guy has done some research. And its hell cool. What was it about prologue?????
The story line is a success, but the way it is portrayed is a huge flop....The main mistake is the 'i'. It was supposed to be 'I' right? And in Ch 2 (I guess) The guy just casually says 'my parents died there bro'.....I mean what? (its silly) The writer should increase the dialog strength. And.. and..... there was this 300 and some numbers. It is wrong......Its the base dude (its the english literature base to avoid numbers like 123...etc)....Avoid numbers(except for time)....more use its written form...Last but not the least watch your spaces between words. Hope it gets better man.......