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There lives a boy thinking He lives an ordinary and Peaceful life while the reality was being hid from him. One Day he finds a book which Opens the gate to the reality of the world and he is greeted by a dark world Full of Weird Creatures.
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Story is good but you need to rebuild the whole structure of the story. You know what I meant. It can be written in a great way. I am not a critique or story planner or whatsoever but you have reshape the appearance of the story and the way it is described like sentences, grammar and other. Wish you best luck on your journey to become a great writer.
While the story is nice but it has its own flaws. For example Kiriko uses a Seven tier magic skill While it's meant for B class Magicians and he is only expected to reach A second class magician. Also can you add A Little More characters so that it create an atmosphere of school and what actually Is taught in their school. Can you also Add a little more detail to the story Just like a Psychological fiction cause that would be great. The overall plot of the story is good
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