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Its my first time writing, please be considerate. I welcome constructive criticism, so please be my guest. I apologise for grammatical error before hand. Thank you for your time.
I love the characters so far and the way you describe them is awsome! I also liked the way you described there feelings it's a very passionate way. And how you described her anger for her mother
I can feel it has a nice character development. Just waiting to know who she is gonna marry villain or hero heheh😅 Waiting for the updates soon
Its my first time writing, please be considerate. I welcome constructive criticism, so please be my guest. I apologise for grammatical error before hand. Thank you for your time.
I love the characters so far and the way you describe them is awsome! I also liked the way you described there feelings it's a very passionate way. And how you described her anger for her mother
I can feel it has a nice character development. Just waiting to know who she is gonna marry villain or hero heheh😅 Waiting for the updates soon